Talk:Alcohol (drug)

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Latest comment: 2 months ago by 94.255.152.53 in topic Proposal: Split out pharmacology

Etymology of the word Alcohol

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Should it be added to the history section of the page on alcohol that the word comes from Arabic?

asking for an opinion from more experienced wikipedians. The Duke of Mars (talk) 17:56, 20 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

The –somewhat complicated– etymology of the word is explained at Alcohol (chemistry)#Etymology, and in a briefer manner in Ethanol#Etymology. It's not strictly necessary, but a concise etymology section would probably also be fitting for this article (don't add it to the history section, which should remain the last section in this article, but create a new etymology section directly below the lead). If you wish, you can copy some of the content from the articles I just linked to, provided you follow the guidance at Wikipedia:Copying within Wikipedia. Thanks, ☿ Apaugasma (talk ) 18:32, 20 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
Wouldn't it make more sense, for dictionary-related content, to refer users to the Wiktionary entry at wikt:alcohol? ‑‑ Eiríkr Útlendi │Tala við mig 23:41, 19 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
agreed, if it needs to be included, I would not do it under the lead, but at the end (as with history) Bquast (talk) 16:17, 19 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Edit suggestion for the "Metronidazole" section

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This section starts out by stating that one of the most important drug/food interactions is between alcohol and Metronidazole but the rest of that section doesn't explain why it's important in any way. I was wondering if it'd be best to remove that line or, if it exists, add to that part to explain why this interaction is so important. Erzloq (talk) 18:49, 26 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

  Done No source, no reason to keep it. Mathnerd314159 (talk) 05:36, 19 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
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I already merged Alcohol-related crime into Alcohol (drug), but @Piotrus objected and reverted the blank-and-redirect part. So here's a formal topic to decide whether to actually merge. I think the pages have substantial overlap and the information from Alcohol-related crime works well in the discussion of social harm in Alcohol (drug) (permalink). Many of the crimes were listed on both pages under similar headings. And once the information is in Alcohol (drug), it's only logical to avoid being WP:REDUNDANT and turn Alcohol-related crime into a redirect. I also removed the term alcohol-related crimes as it didn't seem to add much beyond its dictionary definition - the second source [1] in the lead mentions that the term is not precisely defined and varies across publications. The other argument for merging is article size. Before the merge Alcohol (drug) was 34kb / 5144 words and the crime article was basically a stub, 7kb or 1166 words. After the merge Alcohol (drug) is 41kb or 6187 words, still nowhere near any thresholds in WP:ARTICLESIZE. Mathnerd314159 (talk) 05:39, 16 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:44, 16 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Per WP:NOPAGE, even if an article is notable under GNG or other criteria, it doesn't necessarily merit a stand-alone page, if it can be better covered as part of a larger article. In this case, I think focusing on the social harm the laws are aiming to prevent provides a broader context - there is a diversity of laws and what is a crime in one jurisdiction may not be a crime in another, while the social harms are generally agreed upon. It could also make sense to discuss alcohol-related crime as part of the drug-related crime article, as papers on drug-related crime generally include alcohol in that discussion. Mathnerd314159 (talk) 18:19, 16 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
Hello! I'm here to give a third opinion. Sorry for the long delay. To answer the specific question about whether or not to merge this and Alcohol-related crime, I'm also opposed, to tell the truth, so you can stop reading there if you like I guess, but if you're curious as to why it's hard for me to explain without talking about this whole nexus of articles. My feeling about this is that crime and social harm are not the same thing—crime is based in law, whereas social harm is a much more subjective and nebulous concept. In fact, I would go so far as to argue that having a section called "Social Harm" here is needlessly editorializing and it would be more sensible to instead call it "Social Effects" in the name of neutrality.
This would be in harmony with "Health Effects"—note that although that section does give kind of a grim picture I do admit, that just kind of comes from the nature of the available medical facts. If, after a fair examination of anthropology/sociology/history/etc. sources on alcohol as a drug, it came off as largely deleterious in that sort of context as well, I think that ought to be clear just from the facts too, instead of from a rather preconceived intent to point out its deleterious effects as with "Social Harm".
As for Alcohol-related crime, that must be too big as a topic to fit gracefully into this article I would think—more than I suspect the Alcohol-related crime article really gives credence to at present. If there's any article it ought to have significant overlap with, it must be Alcohol law; in fact, I suspect that Alcohol-related crime and Alcohol law could be neatly brought together into an article called something more like "Alcohol and the law".
You can't have crime without law, and, as Mathnerd314159 points out, law varies with the locale. Therefore, the scheme that Alcohol law follows, where it goes through each part of the world, should also be followed for Alcohol-related crime; it's going to mean something very different in Iran than it will in Illinois just to give a random example.
If Alcohol-related crime was more global in scope like that, I think the case for merging Alcohol law and Alcohol-related crime would be more clear. That picture would make it easier to discuss the legal/criminal aspects of alcohol in fullness, and would facilitate bringing in doubtlessly interesting sources from sociological crimonology and legal history that could easily fall in a gap between Alcohol-related crime and Alcohol law.
So, that's my take in full: change "Social Harm" to "Social Effects" in this article and talk about alcohol's sociocultural dynamics more in general, make Alcohol-related crime more global, and then consider whether to merge Alcohol-related crime and Alcohol law into an article that's more "Alcohol and the law". Okay that's all. ;^^ 🍉◜◞ↂ🄜e𝚜𝚘𝚌𝚊r🅟ම𛱘‎🥑《 𔑪‎talk〗⇤ 03:52, 12 July 2023 (UTC)Reply
this will making the article too long. I'd even want to make some separation for the alcohol article itself. -Lemonaka‎ 16:19, 13 September 2023 (UTC)Reply
  • Against - There are fundamentally different themes, one is is physiological effects (drug), the other is societal consequences (or actual a subset: crime). They should not be conflated. There is also a risk sigmatization of addiction to the drug.
Bquast (talk) 16:16, 19 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Visits to emergency rooms

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From the article: Many emergency room visits involve alcohol use.


First, this sentence clearly means that people are drinking inside the ER as part of their treatment. Was that really the intention?

Second, this sentence implies that people are visiting emergency because alcohol itself has injured them or made them ill, which is a major claim requiring specific proof (e.g. documented number of ethanol poisonings per year, documented number of accidents proven to be primarily caused by alcohol, etc.) Or, if the claim is merely that people who are drunk often show up at the emergency department for non-medical or marginally valid reasons, then clearly state that. TooManyFingers (talk) 05:35, 13 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Proposal: Split out pharmacology

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I have been working on expanding a discussion of the ADME of ethanol. Currently this article is at 7.5k words, with the expansion it would be past the 8k mark mentioned in WP:SIZERULE. The pharmacology overlaps with several other articles, such as Blood alcohol concentration#Metabolism, Alcohol_intoxication#Pathophysiology, Ethanol metabolism, Auto-brewery_syndrome#Metabolic_action. So I was thinking I would split out the whole section to a new Pharmacology of ethanol article. It doesn't seem too controversial as there are articles named like Pharmacology of progesterone, Pharmacodynamics of estradiol, etc. but maybe someone has an idea on what the exact scope of the new article should be (pharmacology, pharmacodynamics, or pharmacokinetics). Mathnerd314159 (talk) 23:30, 30 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

The article has grown since, with xtools reporting 8,601 words — GhostInTheMachine talk to me 14:50, 9 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
Alright. Your comment doesn't really sound like enthusiastic support, but on the other hand 94.255.152.53's edits show no signs of stopping, so it is probably worthwhile. Mathnerd314159 (talk) 04:38, 12 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Mathnerd314159: I support your idea of splitting out the pharmacology section into a new article titled Pharmacology of ethanol. As you mentioned, there are similar articles dedicated to the pharmacology of specific substances, including Pharmacology of bicalutamide, Pharmacology of antidepressants, Pharmacology of progesterone, and Pharmacology of cyproterone acetate – this would provide consistency with Wikipedia's organization. This approach would also help keep the original article on a manageable length and avoid violating the size guidelines. --94.255.152.53 (talk) 05:35, 4 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Alright, I had a draft which was getting close to finished and now it is in mainspace. Mathnerd314159 (talk) 06:35, 4 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
That's fantastic, Mathnerd314159! It's always exciting to see an article come to fruition. I look forward to checking out the new article on the pharmacology of ethanol. It will be a valuable resource. --94.255.152.53 (talk) 08:16, 4 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Mathnerd314159: Also, the current article, Alcohols (medicine), covers a broader range of alcohols used in medicine, including isopropyl alcohol which is not meant for ingestion. Separating the information on ethanol would create a clearer distinction between its medicinal uses and those of other alcohols. --94.255.152.53 (talk) 05:40, 4 June 2024 (UTC)Reply