Talk:Antimonumento 5J
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![]() | A fact from Antimonumento 5J appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 5 June 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Launchballer talk 02:12, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
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- ... that the Antimonumento 5J (pictured) was installed to commemorate police repression during a protest in response to Giovanni López's arrest four years ago today and his subsequent death? Source: Milenio[1]: "se realizó un acto de memoria pacífica donde también se develó un antimonumento con el objetivo de no olvidar los actos de opresión que ejercieron las autoridades de seguridad pública en contra de ciudadanos manifestantes durante el 4, 5 y 6 de junio del 2020, protestas que se realizaron en torno al asesinato de Giovanni López a manos de policías municipales de Ixtlahuacán de los Membrillos." (Translation: "an act of peaceful remembrance was held where an anti-monument was also unveiled with the objective of not forgetting the acts of oppression exercised by public security authorities against protesting citizens during 4, 5 and 6 June 2020, protests that took place around the murder of Giovanni López at the hands of municipal police officers of Ixtlahuacán de los Membrillos.")
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Skyrocket Galaxy
- Comment: The nomination is specific for May 4.
Moved to mainspace by Tbhotch (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 45 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.(CC) Tbhotch™ 07:03, 18 April 2024 (UTC).
- Length, date, qpq ok, no close paraphrase found. Image on Commons. Not sure we'd time the DYK to match what the death anniversary, though. --Soman (talk) 09:46, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- I recommend promoting this on 5 June, the anniversary of its installation.--Launchballer 16:24, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, if valid and if required: (CC) Tbhotch™ 17:52, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- I recommend promoting this on 5 June, the anniversary of its installation.--Launchballer 16:24, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the Antimonumento 5J (pictured) was installed to commemorate police repression during protests that occurred four years ago in response to the death of Giovanni López?
GA Review
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Nominator: Tbhotch (talk · contribs) 21:45, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 15:06, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 15:06, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Tbhotch Here are my comments. :) Arconning (talk) 13:08, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
Prose and MoS
editLead and infobox
edit- protests of 4, 5, The artwork was installed on 5 June 2023, authorities removed the sculpture, add a comma at the end.
- monument be reinstalled,, add to after monument.
- Optional. Citation in the lead is alright but if you could mention it in the body and remove the citation in the lead, that would be alright.
- Removed. It was for the DYK.
Background
edit- Giovanni died of head trauma from a blunt object, , remove comma.
- Mex$, US$, link to the denominations.
- Somebody once told me that money would fall into WP:OVERLINK
- According to the family, they refused the payment,, After Floyd's murder,, remove comma.
- The video became viral,, change became to went, and remove the comma.
- who were reported as forcibly disappeared., replace as to to have.
- "El Halconazo" , add a comma at the end.
History and installation
edit- on the opposite side of the State Government Palace, add a comma at the end.
- another anti-monument, add was at the end.
- Giovanni's case was not isolated and, add that at the end.
- the lights in the plaza were turned off, add a comma at the end.
Replica and ordered reinstallation
edit- for installation was submitted , add a comma at the end.
- consult with the state civil protection, remove the.
- Firefighters rejected the reinstallation, add a comma at the end.
- and that (being made of steel) it could cause electric problems,, remove comma.
- is one meter shorter, convert to imperial system as well.
Images
edit- All have proper licenses, just be careful on the second to last one.
Refs
edit- Random reference check: 1, 8, 15, 19, 27, good!
- Earwig and manual check seems great.
Misc
edit- No ongoing edit war, broad and focused information about the background of the topic and the topic itself, neutral.
- @Arconning: Thanks for the review, I have completed most of the concerns. (CC) Tbhotch™ 18:11, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Tbhotch You should mention in the body that the monument was built due to his death and the protests relating to his death. I believe that's my last comment, and we'll be set! Arconning (talk) 04:21, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Thanks for reviewing, Arconning. For the record, I support the promotion of this article, assuming all of your concerns are addressed appropriately. Thanks! ---Another Believer (Talk) 14:35, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
- Added, and thanks. (CC) Tbhotch™ 02:34, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
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