Draft talk:Celoxis
Latest comment: 1 month ago by Vivekjain9024 in topic Acknowledging COI
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Acknowledging COI
editHello, I’d like to improve the Draft article. I want to acknowledge that I have a connection to the company, so I’m avoiding direct editing and instead seeking guidance on how to make the page neutral and meet Wikipedia standards. Vivekjain9024 (talk) 13:40, 10 October 2024 (UTC)
- Could someone provide specific feedback on the issues that need to be addressed to make this page ready for the main space? I understand that the page was moved due to concerns about neutrality and possible COI, and I would like to correct any problems.
- I have tried to add independent and reliable sources, but I would appreciate feedback on whether the sources cited are appropriate, or if more or better sources are required. I am also working to ensure the article is written in a neutral tone. If any parts of the draft still sound promotional, could you point them out so I can revise them?
- Once I address the issues, would it be possible for someone to review the article and provide guidance on whether it's ready to be submitted again for main space? I want to ensure the article meets all guidelines.
- Thank you for your time and help! Vivekjain9024 (talk) 13:42, 10 October 2024 (UTC)
- Hello editors,
- I’m working on improving the Draft:Celoxis page, and I’m seeking guidance on how to make it ready for mainspace. I was inspired by the Triskell page, which covers a similar topic. My goal is to structure and present the Celoxis article similarly, ensuring it meets Wikipedia’s notability and neutrality standards.
- I understand that there may be a potential conflict of interest as I am associated with the company. For this reason, I am not directly editing the article and would like help from neutral editors to make sure everything is compliant.
- Could someone kindly review the draft and provide feedback on:
- - Whether the structure and tone of the article match Wikipedia’s neutrality standards (similar to the Triskell page).
- - Suggestions on improving the content, if needed.
- - Whether the sources provided are appropriate and meet Wikipedia’s criteria for reliability.
- Your assistance would be greatly appreciated in helping make this article live. Thank you for your time and guidance!
- Vivekjain9024 (talk) 13:54, 10 October 2024 (UTC)