Talk:Itamar Medical

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Latest comment: 3 years ago by 2001:67C:2D50:0:D962:EA41:86EE:9048 in topic Mistake in sentence?

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A clean up was made and I removed the tag. If more needed, please ping me here and will be done and discussed. Thank you, --Shanisun (talk) 06:30, 10 June 2021 (UTC).Reply

You are a paid editor you should NOT be directly editing the article at all let alone removing tags. Theroadislong (talk) 07:52, 10 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
I am sorry for that, I wasnt aware. Should I do something now? --Shanisun (talk) 13:25, 10 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

Mistake in sentence?

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In the chapter "Company overview" it is written

when trying to rescue his injured soldier

this sounds like incomplete - should maybe written an injured soldier?. --Ruediger — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:67C:2D50:0:D962:EA41:86EE:9048 (talk) 22:16, 11 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

I changed it, I hope it is good. --Ruedi