Talk:1988 Women's Cricket World Cup final/GA1
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Latest comment: 4 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:47, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 13:47, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, will take a look through in detail tomorrow. Harrias talk 20:42, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Background
edit- "England had won the first world cup" - World Cup
- "Australia had beaten England" - defeated
- Wikilink wickets to the relevant article
Route to the final
edit- "once against Australia and once against New Zealand." - possible minor rewrite to avoid repetition of the same phrase?
- "Ireland and the Netherlands were well adrift," - behind
Summary
edit- "in Melbourne, Australia on 18 December." - comma after Australia please
- "Heather Smith, of The Sydney Morning Herald suggested that," - the first comma isn't needed I think
- Wikilink the first mention of the term "crease" to the relevant article and the same for the terms "delivery" and "over"
- "earning praise from both The Sydney Morning Herald and The Times,[9][6]" - refs in numerical order
- The MOS specifically states this is not necessary: "References need not be moved solely to maintain the chronological order of footnotes as they appear in the article..". Harrias talk 20:42, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
- It's a part of the MOS that I don't agree with but it's no deal breaker MWright96 (talk) 08:17, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
- The MOS specifically states this is not necessary: "References need not be moved solely to maintain the chronological order of footnotes as they appear in the article..". Harrias talk 20:42, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
- "and in the fourteenth over," - 14th
Aftermath
edit- Both mentions of "world cup" should be spelt as "World Cup"
- @MWright96: Other than the point I responded to last night, all have been changed as suggested. Thanks for the review. Harrias talk 08:53, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Harrias: Am satisfied with the changes and will be promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 12:02, 2 May 2020 (UTC)