Talk:2012 Scottish Cup final/GA1

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 11:40, 14 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

Have made a minor change, hope you don't mind. No issues with reliability of sourcing, just some quibbles about prose:

  • One dablink needs fixing
  • Tables need to comply with MOS:DTT, specifically rowscopes need to be added. See 2012 Football League Cup Final for example.
  • Is Twitter an appropriate source for the match programme rationale?
  • sent-off and extra-time do not require a hyphen
  • Under 'Route to the final' it is fine to remove the brackets in 'Hibernian (Hibs)' and likewise 'Heart of Midlothian (Hearts)' as you have introduced them in the lead.
  • "Suso Santana had won the penalty but was accused of diving by the St. Johnstone players and manager." needs ref
  • "Hasselbaink then scored a goal which was ruled out because the referee had not given St. Mirren an advantage." likewise needs ref
  • "looked offisde" bold word misspelt
  • There are several instances of WP:OVERLINK: Scottish Premier League being one, Hampden Park another
  • Media coverage need citations to confirm the match was broadcast on BBC One Scotland/Sky Sports, as well as radio commentary provided by BBC Radio Scotland.

Otherwise happy to pass. On hold. Lemonade51 (talk) 11:51, 14 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

Hi Lemonade, thanks for the quick review. I will get to those things tomorrow - but I justed wanted to point out now that those two refs you asked for are already there. They are just at the end of the next sentence. I added those bits and I personally don't see the need for the same ref at the end of two consecutive sentences. But I will change it if you's prefer that. Cheers Adam4267 (talk) 22:49, 14 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

Given that changes have been made, I will be happy to pass. Lemonade51 (talk) 21:26, 20 July 2012 (UTC)Reply