Talk:Assassination of Talaat Pasha/GA1
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Reviewer: Guettarda (talk · contribs) 18:32, 24 April 2021 (UTC) This is a fascinating read, and something a knew nothing about. Guettarda (talk) 18:32, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
This is excellent. I have very little to add.
Talat Pasha's exile in Berlin
edit- Neubabelsberg redirects to Babelsberg; I'm not sure if it needs a link to de:Neubabelsberg
- Removed
Other testimony on the genocide
edit- Is Mr. Terzibashian's first name known?
- No, I checked the original trial transcript and it's not stated. Same with the prosecutor, Gollnick, whose first name is not stated in any source.
- The following section begins with "His wife Christine..." A new section should be more "stand alone".
- Reworded, thank you!
General
edit- I'm curious about the choice to refer to Adolf von Gordon as "Gordon" rather than "von Gordon"
- I double checked and that's the form both Hofmann and Ihrig use. (t · c) buidhe 01:40, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
- Tessa Hofmann is linked twice in the body of the article, as is Carolyn Dean.
- I feel like these mentions are too sparse and far apart so that the reader has likely forgotten who they were before getting to the second mention. (t · c) buidhe 01:40, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
Guettarda (talk) 23:13, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- Guettarda I believe I've addressed everything above. Thanks for reviewing the article! (t · c) buidhe 01:40, 25 April 2021 (UTC)