Talk:Balepete inscriptions and hero stones

Latest comment: 18 days ago by Tolozen in topic Copyediting and possible section rewrite

Copyediting and possible section rewrite

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I think that the article could seriously benefit from some copyediting, mostly in the form of grammatical fixes, dealing with some overlinking, and things along those lines. The Balepete 1628CE Traders Ranganathaswamy Temple donation inscription section in particular should likely be renamed, and it'd make more sense to have the translation along with the transcription instead of separately. This would probably require someone who speaks Kannada or at least has a better understanding of these Herostones than I. Tolozen (talk) 20:39, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I've made a few minor improvements, primarily with punctuation and fixing run-on sentences in the first couple sections. I broke up the long paragraph into smaller, more readable paragraphs but I still feel a complete rewrite may be necessary. I did not touch the translation portion. I agree on changing the section name for Balepete 1628CE Traders Ranganathaswamy Temple donation inscription. Would something short and simple like "History" suffice? Se7enNationArmy2024 (talk) 21:58, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
Yes, that seems fair. I appreciate the small copyedits. I went ahead and changed the section title to just that. Tolozen (talk) 08:28, 11 November 2024 (UTC)Reply