Talk:Capture of Lemnos

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 02:36, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Discussion

• Spotchecks performed; no issues found. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:41, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions

Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Capture of Lemnos

• but insisted on getting the consent of the British government for this first. suggest changing getting to obtaining

  @Cplakidas: That is my only suggestion, although I have made some copyedits, feel free to revert any you dislike. Passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 03:04, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

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Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk) 10:12, 26 February 2023 (UTC)

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• ... that during the First Balkan War, the almost unopposed capture of Lemnos by the Greek navy enabled it to blockade the Dardanelles? Source: Summary of the article, including Hall's quote "The conquest of Lemnos effectively closed the Dardanelles."
  • ALT1: ... that although proposed by naval strategists for years beforehand, the capture of Lemnos by the Greek navy was decided on only upon the outbreak of the First Balkan War? Source: Summary of Background section. More specifically, Fotakis, pp. 47-48: "It is not clear who originally introduced the idea of the occupation of Lemnos instead of developing the war anchorage at Oreus. All available evidence points to the fact that Coundouriotes, with his customary courage, pressed the adoption of this idea upon a circumspect Venizelos....Having reached a decision on the occupation of Lemnos, the Greek fleet sailed towards the Dardanelles on 18 October"
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Myron Levoy

Improved to Good Article status by Cplakidas (talk). Self-nominated at 12:35, 28 January 2023 (UTC). Note: As of October 2022, all changes made to promoted hooks will be logged by a bot. The log for this nomination can be found at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Capture of Lemnos (1912), so please watch a successfully closed nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

• Article meets criteria and QPQ done. ALT0 is better, but I would go:

• ... that during the First Balkan War, the capture of Lemnos by the Greek navy enabled it to blockade the Dardanelles?

Srnec (talk) 20:16, 28 January 2023 (UTC)

• Srnec's suggestion is fine by me, that was my original draft for ALT0 either way :D. Constantine ✍ 13:03, 29 January 2023 (UTC)