Talk:Siege of Turjak

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Infobox Pic-code

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Hi all, I have worked and buffed out this article, but 1 image 1 put into the infobox is not coming through. What to do? I have put in without "File:" with it and every other way of it.

Any advise would be appreciated. Regards,

Mr. NiceGuy

Recent edits

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POV issue and bad grammar

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The article was clearly written by someone that has a very poor comprehension of the English language and is clearly biased, the entire article needs to be scrapped and rewritten from scratch or, at the very least, severely modified as this is completely unacceptable.

"the Slovene Partisans were the Allies of the Soviet Union in Slovenia this alliance had the objective to extend the communism and to obtain the power they could not in democratic elections in Slovenia."

The Slovene partisans were also allies of the US, UK and number of other countries, why exactly is the Soviet union emphasised? The line also claims that the communists could not obtain their power in democratic elections, this is weird as the communist party was banned pre-war and the country was under occupation by a foreign military power (or several of them) so democratic elections could not be held regardless if the communists were able, or not, to democratically secure a majority in a hypothetical elections.

"They cooperate with Soviet Union on the Comintern and in the battlefield many times with Italian forces (Grčarice, Turjak, etc)"

Again, they also cooperated with a number of other countries. They, however, did not cooperate with Italian forces or did so only after the Italian capitulation and this, in my opinion, needs to be made clear as someone reading the article might assume they cooperated with the Fascist Italian forces which the partisans were fighting against, in fact most fighting was conducted in the Italian occupation zone.

"Their objective was obtain the power and start the revolution in Slovenia during the occupation of the Axis forces creating a dramatically civil war."

This part is almost completely nonsensical. How exactly is a country under foreign occupation in a state of civil war? I don't think that in any other country the conflict between partisans/guerillas and collaborators is described as a civil war.

"The battle was against the pro-western democracies men formed as Village Guards (Slovene: Vaske Straze), and other forces detachments of Royal Yugoslav Army.

Since when are Nazi/Fascist collaborationist forces known as pro-western/democracy, and how did detachments of the Royal Yugoslav army participate when the Royal Yugoslav army was defeated in 1941 when the Axis forces invaded Yugoslavia? This makes no sense. If former members of the Royal Yugoslav army participated in the battle, it does not mean that the Royal Yugoslav Army did.


That's enough I think, either way the user that made these edits should in no way be allowed to edit any more articles. Janez90 (talk) 18:59, 28 June 2015 (UTC)Janez90Reply

I have deleted most of the article and rewritten a short description without sources, hopefully I will be able to rectify this.

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