Talk:BeSeatSmart Child Passenger Safety Program

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The problem passage has been removed and re-worked for both clarity and the copyright issue. Please be aware that due to policy statement there are only so many ways to say the same thing. In this case, best practice standards must apply.

WAY too much unnecessary detail in this article. It reads like a corporate brochure, and has too much information about tangential topics. And don't embed external links in the prose and especially not in the headings. Use an "External links" section at the bottom of the article to list links to official sites and other relevant things. ~Amatulić (talk) 21:03, 15 December 2011 (UTC)

Working on re-write now...suggestions? I could only beat my head against learning Wiki-syntax so long in one go...  :-P ~Catfeet1 —Preceding undated comment added 13:11, 16 December 2011 (UTC).

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Asking new article about Child Transport Safety

I would like a new article dedicated to Child Transport Safety topic.

I consider that such an article should be created because child safety in transport is a concern for various countries both in Europe and in North-America.

Such article could include various subtopics:

• For America:
  • BeSeatSmart Child Passenger Safety Program
  • and other sources, for instance: https://www.npr.org/sections/health-shots/2017/05/23/529685650/study-finds-43-percent-of-children-killed-in-car-crashes-were-improperly-restrai
  • the concept of school bus might also fit in such an article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.199.96.191 (talk) 19:02, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
• For European Union:
  • something based on such ETSC source: http://etsc.eu/wp-content/uploads/PIN-FLASH_34.pdf
• for technologies:
  • for cars: Child safety seat; Isofix; Booster seat; Child safety lock
  • for cycling: Children's bicycle seat ((with also some words about children helmet
  • for pedestrians: statistics for killed children
• Notable countries including Rest of the World might also be covered; article might take into account Unicef document http://www.who.int/violence_injury_prevention/child/injury/world_report/Road_traffic_injuries_english.pdf

Article could also be connect to other articles such as Child protection or Road Traffic Safety. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.199.96.191 (talk) 18:54, 6 March 2018 (UTC)