Talk:Bernard Schriever/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 03:18, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:18, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

• Images properly licensed
• External links OK and no DABs
• He remained behind as chief of the maintenance and engineering division of the Fifth Air Force Service Command until the end of the war. Remained behind?

  Y Changed to "remained in Australia". Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)

• After the war, Schriever returned joined the United States Army Air Forces An extra word here?

  Y Deleted "returned" Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)

• USAF standardized the flying boom "on" the flying boom

  Y Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)

• The US military uses dmy date format

  Y Converted. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 02:54, 10 September 2019 (UTC)

• 3,000 pounds (1,400 kg) nuclear warhead with use the adjectival form for the weight and "within"

  YDone. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)

• White reorganized then typo?

  Y Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)

• Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:16, 8 September 2019 (UTC)

  Thank you. It wasn't intended as a major overhaul, but the original version was very poor, and largely unsourced. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)

  Understood. I'd recommend that the date format be fixed before any ACR though.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:31, 8 September 2019 (UTC)