Boart Longyear page edits - Conversation with Orange Mike

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Mike - Continuing our discussion from last week, if I change the present tense to past, delete "world's leading" and remove the awards section, I believe I will have addressed all the reasons you mentioned for the deletion. Will that be sufficient? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Johnkrantz123 (talkcontribs) 13:23, 17 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

A lot of that stuff has already been taken care of. We've still got too much content sourced to company sources rather than impartial, reliable third parties; and "references" not in a proper footnote format. --Orange Mike | Talk 20:02, 18 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

This article has several other articles linked to it - which means it is no longer an orphan. Is it possible to remove that part from the issues box at the top of the article? Thanks.--JWbubbles (talk) 17:24, 25 September 2013 (UTC)Reply