Talk:Brummer-class cruiser/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:26, 7 October 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- Shouldn't Ol-Marine be Öl-Marine? Couple instances of she vs. they in armament section. Brummer class cruiser should have Brummer-class hyphenated.
- Should all be fixed. Novik doesn't use umlauts so I just followed that. Parsecboy (talk) 10:40, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
- Shouldn't Ol-Marine be Öl-Marine? Couple instances of she vs. they in armament section. Brummer class cruiser should have Brummer-class hyphenated.
- B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- Link boilers, presumably water tube.
- Don't forget this.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:43, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
- Oops, thanks for catching that. Parsecboy (talk) 13:56, 9 October 2011 (UTC)
- Don't forget this.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:43, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
- Link boilers, presumably water tube.
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- No picture or drawing is available?
- File:Brummer class line drawing.jpg should be fine with fair use (and is probably PD anyway - Novik states it's a reproduction of a contemporary illustration. Parsecboy (talk) 10:40, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
- No picture or drawing is available?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail: