Talk:Duilio-class ironclad/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 23:22, 14 March 2016 (UTC)

The article looks pretty good, with only a few minor issues:

• Citations are unecessary in the lead if the material is cited in the body.
  • The specific line is not cited in the body.
• Hyphenate ISBNs.
  • Not necessary - someone who knows a lot more about this than I do pointed out that ISBN formatting is not standard, and since I don't know the specific formatting for each ISBN, I don't bother adding hyphens. For what it's worth, worldcat doesn't use hyphens either.
• Shouldn't the first cite be a note?
  • Not really worth splitting it off into its own section.
• Link "guard ship"
  • Already linked, both in the lead and the body.

--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 23:22, 14 March 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing the article. Parsecboy (talk) 12:07, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

• Passing, Well done.!--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 20:52, 16 March 2016 (UTC)