Talk:Clavado en un Bar/GA2

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Magiciandude in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 15:24, 2 June 2022 (UTC)Reply


Infobox

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  • Remove the mixing studio from the infobox, as that is different from recording
  • Those studios should be in the parameter studios, not recorded
  • Replace flastlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
  • Per the body of the article, "additional recordings took place at Classic Recording Rentals, Conway Studios, and Mad Hatter Studios" → these should be added here as well

  Done

Lead

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  • who handled productions → who handled the production
  • "charts in the United States." → charts, respectively.
  • ""Clavado en un Bar"" was" → The song was
  • "and peaked at number ten" → and his version peaked at number 10

  Done

Background and composition

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  • Sueños Líquidos → year of release in between brackets

  Done

Promotion and reception

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  • "A music video for the song was filmed that same year, which an editor from Billboard commented about: "Trying to forget someone? This is the perfect song for it!" → he commented about the song, not the video. Am I missing something here?
  • Wikilink the Rolling Stones
  • ASCAP → American Society of Composers, Authors and Publishers (ASCAP) + wikilink
  • José Alberto "El Canario" chart peaks should be added to the Charts section

  Done

Formats and track listings

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  • Use spaced en dash,  –

  Done

Charts

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  • Fine

References

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  • Wikilink Billboard to Billboard (magazine) on ref 3
  • Wikilin KXAS-TV on ref 11
  • A source check has been conducted on references 2, 3, 11, 18, 20, 23, 24 and 27

  Done

Overall

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