Talk:Comdirect Bank
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This article was edited to contain a partial translation of Comdirect from the German Wikipedia. Consult the history of the original page to see a list of its authors. |
Self-promotion
editThis company entry is written in a very promotional way, esp the sections Digitalisation (direct banks are all digital in 2018), products (listing product benefits such as free etc), structure (listing the complete board whereas key people in infobox is more common) and responsibility (CSR is standard for most companies). I suggest to 1) delete the sections digitalisation and responsibility 2) shorten the product part and include it in the intro 3) delete the board part of structure and merge the remainder with History Wikide12 (talk) 08:08, 14 July 2018 (UTC)
Incorrect financials
edit1) the assets figure is overstated by 50% compared to the annual report 2) figures are not formatted correctly (using , instead of .) resulting in numbers showing billions instead of millions Wikide12 (talk) 08:10, 14 July 2018 (UTC)
- Done. -- 2.247.250.235 (talk) 21:45, 15 July 2018 (UTC)
Artificial amount of references
editAn artificial high amount of references has been created. Over 60 references for a small German company with 1,400 employees. Looks like SEO agency work. Wikide12 (talk) 08:11, 14 July 2018 (UTC)
- More sources are always better. Please read WP:REF. -- 2.247.250.235 (talk) 21:47, 15 July 2018 (UTC)