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Hello there, I need some help representing this paragraph in a coherent professional way that suits Wikipedia.
Appreciate the opinion.
The paragraph:
The Egyptian GID scored a major success in terms of strategic field across all armies around the world. On 2021, Elhamy A. Elsebaey leading the informatics decision of GID, defended a crucial cyberattack in cyber warfare history, with his well generated optimum system, which he did supervise personally with support of some leads in cyber security all over the world as noted by Reuters.
Elhamy Elsebaey is a very well known name in GIS, leading the cybersecurity and technology devision in the Egyptian army, Yet, very few information about him to media for confidentiality and security purpose as noted by GID website. Historicalfrubie (talk) 02:15, 17 March 2022 (UTC)Reply
For starters, you need references: add the reference to Reuters. The last sentence also may need a reference. After that you need to link to that crucial cyberattack's article if one exists; or add a few lines about it - some details. Please first include all this information, and then revisit grammar issues.- Abdul Muhsytalk08:33, 18 March 2022 (UTC)Reply
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