Talk:Depend (undergarment)
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editThis reads almost like a sales pamphlet that I had to google a line from it just to make sure it wasn't copied from somewhere. (The only hit that turned up was clearly taken from this article, so it seems it's not a copyvio at least.) It is informative, I just think the tone of the article needs a little work. - furrykef (Talk at me) 03:01, 16 November 2005 (UTC)
- I cleaned it up just a little by removing sentence fragments, for example, "Ideal for X" becomes "They are ideal for X". However, the text gets repetitive this way ("They are this, they are that..."), so it needs to be rewritten further. Also, the article needs to be consistent about "it" versus "they" when referring to a particular item ("It does have perforated sides" versus "They do have perforated sides"). - furrykef (Talk at me) 03:09, 16 November 2005 (UTC)
Semi-protection
editI would like to request semi-protection for this article. Many page-blanking vandalisms have occurred.
Name
editAs I can remember, that brand used to be called Depends. I wonder when it was renamed to Depend. --PJ Pete —Preceding comment was added at 04:36, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
Edited
editI've removed the excessive descriptions unnecessary for an encyclopedic article. A basic run-down of the available products, with a brief outline of the design and intended usage is sufficient. This is NOT the place to go into details of leakguards and comparisons to other products, for eg. Before there's a slew of complaints that removing such info is discriminatory against the afflicted, balence the common sense. It is absurd to pretend that fetishism does not influence otherwise straightforward entries: basic information starts to morphs into lavish copy and user guides, and this article had been duly done. There are plenty of sites and links to provide the rest of it. PS. So why am I here? I'm a RN :) Plutonium27 (talk) 19:13, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
Depends
editCount on your life with Depends!! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.91.229.5 (talk) 21:47, 6 September 2008 (UTC)