Talk:Ed Warren (politician)
Latest comment: 4 years ago by 97198 in topic Did you know nomination
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 | A fact from Ed Warren (politician) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 12 July 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 15:38, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
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- ... that Ed Warren, the 35th and 41st Mayor of Cheyenne, Wyoming, was an actor and one of three Cheyenne mayors to have played on Broadway? "Ed Warren Cheyenne's Vaudeville Mayor". February 12, 2020.
Created by Jon698 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:02, 21 May 2020 (UTC).
Just a quick question before I do the full review: is it okay to use the Wordpress link as the reference here? The link appears to be an official source but the use of Wordpress gives me pause. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 14:23, 9 June 2020 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: I know you can't see newspapers.com links but I found the original citation from the Casper Tribune-Herald for the hook fact: [1]. It's now in there instead of the Wyoming State Archives link. Also a note for Jon698, since I happen to have made dozens of clippings from the Casper papers in the last two weeks: most of the publication lists will need updating to reflect the actual title of the papers (newspapers.com is quite bad at this for papers that merged or changed their names). Raymie (t • c) 01:45, 20 June 2020 (UTC)
- Great hook! Here is a full review: New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I can view the newspaper article uploaded by Raymie and while it verifies third mayor and Broadway, you need an inline cite for the hook fact about vaudeville. QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 20:15, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: Fixed. Took out the vaudeville part. - Jon698 (talk) 02:10, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
That sounds like the best solution, and it's still very hooky, thanks. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 11:26, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
