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TNT?
editWhen I first saw this article, I thought it may just be the poster child for one needing wp:TNT to fix it. Unfortunately, I think it still is. I just tried to clean it up, yet am so confused. The article talks about these different islands while using grammatical articles whose subjects are unclear, so they get all jumbled up in the mind of the reader. For example: first the island separates a lake from the sea, then it's in a river?!? Is the lake actually a sea inlet? Why are these other islands even mentioned? -if they are islands and not regions, other inlets, mountains, villages, etc. I really can't tell from the article. The acreage, square meter areas, square mileage, etc. also don't make sense. I hope I at least got some of what the article was trying to say correct.
Along with the use of very broken english, in both syntax and grammar, it may just be better to start over with this one. Thoughts? GenQuest "Talk to Me" 23:53, 6 July 2017 (UTC)
- Agreed, also see Wikipedia:Village_pump_(proposals)#I.27ve_had_enough._.22Approved_articles.22_clearly_no_better_than_ones_that_skip_it
- I've AfDed it. Andy Dingley (talk) 00:11, 7 July 2017 (UTC)
- Nope, quite a few improvements to article have been made, of course more are always welcome:)) Coolabahapple (talk) 13:49, 9 July 2017 (UTC)
- There are still some issues with verification of content. But the article at this point, after an amazing amount of re-writing, has indeed been blown up and started all over again, and is finally in a somewhat readable and comprehendable form. GenQuest "Talk to Me" 15:08, 9 July 2017 (UTC)