Talk:Ediel López Falcón/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 20:47, 8 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Opening statement

In reviews I conduct, I may make small copyedits. These will only be limited to spelling and punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. For replying to Reviewer comment, please use Done, Fixed, Added, Not done, Doing..., or Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. —♠Vami _IV†♠ 20:47, 8 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

@Vami IV: Thanks for the review. Please see my responses below. Cheers, MX (✉ • ✎) 23:09, 14 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Prose

~~sought for safe haven Axe "for".~~

Done

~~The second paragraph of "Arrest and trial" should be condensed to the brass tacks.~~

Fixed I've trimmed down several parts from this paragraph. Let me know what you think.

~~How/when was López Falcón finally identified?~~

Newspaper achives do not indicate when he was identified.

~~were the first to announce of López Falcón's conviction Delete "of".~~

Done

GA progress

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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