Talk:Fire and Ice (Hunter novel)

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I added which Erin Hunter speciffically wrote the book. ClawClaw 19:59, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

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BetacommandBot 23:19, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

Revision as of 2008.03.07.

I rewrote the article to give it more encyclopedic value. Please remember that this article is meant to present the book mainly to people who never heard about it before. Consequently, there is no need to enumerate a lots of names, to present the plot in an in-universe style, to present non-relevant details, and to use words and expressions that are not understood by those who did not read the books. Remember, the article was nominated for deletion because of these flaws. Yrtgm (talk) 18:12, 7 March 2008 (UTC)

Poor Grammer

Some of the grammer is pretty bad..."They fall in love and begin to secretly meet each other. They meeting each other against Fireheart's warnings." This needs some work...Smallman12q (talk) 00:45, 22 August 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I understand, Truthkeeper88 has agreed to copyedit the article to show me what to look out for i the future. Derild4921☼ 01:12, 22 August 2010 (UTC)

How kind of them...I might help out as well tmrw.=DSmallman12q (talk) 02:17, 22 August 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Derild4921☼ 14:09, 22 August 2010 (UTC)

I've copyedited it a bit, but I can't do the plot without reading the book...which isn't my type. Hope I helped a bit...I also left a few comments where sentences are akward.Smallman12q (talk) 17:31, 25 August 2010 (UTC)

Thanks anyways, I'll work on the problems soon. Derild4921☼ 17:47, 25 August 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry, now that that GA is over, I'm really going to focus here! This article will become very shiny over the next month! Brambleclawx 20:36, 26 August 2010 (UTC)

Warrior Code

In the first paragraph it mentions the warrior code. I'm pretty sure that's capitalized since it's an official law/documentish thing :P. It's like their Constitution, which we would capitalize as well. Ratkinzluver33 (talk) 16:39, 30 October 2010 (UTC)

It depends on how it is in the books; if it's capitalized there, then it is here. I'm pretty sure it isn't, but I haven't read the series in a while. Derild4921☼ 16:41, 30 October 2010 (UTC)

not capitsalised in books, do not capitalise here (unless we agree by discussion to do so). Brambleclawx 23:39, 30 October 2010 (UTC)

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