Talk:Forge Park/495 station

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Sammi Brie in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 05:26, 21 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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Almost there. It's been a while, so give it a once-over. 7-day hold to Pi.1415926535. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 05:26, 21 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

@Sammi Brie: Thanks for the review! All easy issues to fix. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 00:38, 24 December 2022 (UTC)Reply
@Sammi Brie Just want to confirm - has this article passed, or is there still more to do? I was a bit confused by this edit that another editor made, and wanted to check before I changed the Wikiproject templates to GA. Cheers, Pi.1415926535 (talk) 17:39, 24 December 2022 (UTC)Reply
@Pi.1415926535 I intended it for listing. I use a nomination handling script by Novem Linguae that did not work properly because this article has a slash in its title and had the bug reported (User talk:Novem Linguae/Scripts/GANReviewTool). Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 18:17, 24 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

Copy changes

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  • "sooner after" is this a mistake?
    •   Done
  • Service on the line, by then down to a single daily mixed train ended in 1920. Complete the appositive by adding a comma after "train"
    •   Done
  • The station opened on June 2, 1988 as remember your DATECOMMA
    •   Done
  • The MBTA initially leased ticket booth and concession stand to the town for $1 annually add "the" after "leased"
    •   Done
  • a potential extension to Woonsocket, Rhode Island via remember your GEOCOMMA
    •   Done

Sourcing and spot checks

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Earwig finds no issues (3.8%). Five sources were chosen for a spot check, no issues found:

  • 11: I trust you here. I can't find the station because I can't get sufficient resolution on the map image. Another ref was chosen instead...
    • 1: Researched timeline of MBTA service changes. I presume this is considered an RS?
      • Yes - Belcher is an officer of the Boston Street Railway Association (and the original version of the timeline was published by them). I did manage to find a higher-resolution copy of the atlas for source 1.
  • 15: Unionville is not mentioned, presumably because it wasn't even part of the case.
  • 18: MBTA approval for 365-space parking lot in Franklin.
  • 20: Mention of Franklin Youth Services use of profits.
  • 21: Has to be combined with #1 to get the fact, but works to bolster #1.

Other items

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  • No concerns about the images which are all libre licensed and have alt text.
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