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I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 14:56, 28 April 2013 (UTC)Reply
Hi Dan, on first pass, this looks like excellent work. I'm sorry this was allowed to sit in the GA queue for so long, when it seems to need so little work before passage. I've made a few tweaks as I went; feel free to revert any with which you disagree. I'll begin the checklist now. -- Khazar2 (talk) 21:42, 28 April 2013 (UTC)Reply
No problem with the wait; these articles aint going nowhere, LOL. I think this line needs punctuation to delineate the citation, and this shouldn't use a present participle. Otherwise, good looks for the review. Dan56 (talk) 00:20, 29 April 2013 (UTC)Reply
It's not a big deal either way, but I don't think the MOS calls for extra punctuation to be added to the sentence to set off a footnote. The first example in MOS:PUNCTFOOT is grammatically comparable to the sentence in question and doesn't add the extra comma:
"Example: Flightless birds have a reduced keel[10] and smaller wing bones than flying birds of similar size.[11][12]".
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
