Talk:Greek destroyer Lonchi (1907)/GA1
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Latest comment: 11 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:37, 7 September 2013 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:37, 7 September 2013 (UTC)
- Image needs a source and the appropriate Greek PD tag.
- Delete the ship's stats from the lede; they're needless duplication of what's in the main body.
- "Thyella class ships/destroyer" should be hyphenated as Thyella class is a compound adjective for the noun.
- Measurements in the main body and in infobox should match.
- Link Hotchkiss gun, broken up, torpedo tubes
- Correct Hydra-class battleships to Hydra-class ironclads.
- Tell the reader where Mudros Bay is (what island).
- The lede says that Lonchi was back in Greek colors by 1918, but that's not what the main body says.
- This is awkward: was pushed into heavy service patrolling the eastern Mediterranean and in support of land operations.
- This is passive voice: Operations came to a close. How about "Operations ended"
- Duplicate link to Ottoman Empire.
- No DABs.
Ping--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:13, 20 September 2013 (UTC)
Failed as non-responsive.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:51, 4 October 2013 (UTC)