Talk:Hoa Lư
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Latest comment: 14 years ago by Dragfyre in topic A few notes
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A few notes
editA few notes about this article:
- Too many images, not enough text. Consider removing some of the images and adding a {{Commonscat}} template to link to the rest of the images on Commons.
- It seems some sections of the article are incomplete, such as the "Daughter of King Dinh Tien Hoang Temple" section: "This is a small temple near Nhat Tru Pagoda. This temple worship daughter of King Dinh Tien Hoang. After his father was killed, she herself" ...and that's it. These should be completed.
- Some of the references and external links on this page are from the websites of tour companies, which, unless I'm mistaken, aren't considered WP:RELIABLE sources, or appropriate external links. It'd be much better to find some journal or book references; as this article relates to an important part of Vietnamese history, there should be a number of such references available.
- Furthermore, while you're adding more book/journal references, consider adding more citations to back up individual statements. This will help readers to verify these statements themselves and learn more about the subject. As it is, some of the sections have no inline citations whatsoever.
Cheers! --dragfyre_ʞןɐʇc 18:03, 14 August 2010 (UTC)