Talk:Hurricane Arthur/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 15:43, 7 June 2015 (UTC)

• Any reason you choose "became" and not "was" in the first sentence?
• "The storm then trekked swiftly northward" - looks more northeast
• Why no link to US$ in the lead?
• Where did the initial low form from? A front? A trough? Check the TCR, it has more on origins.
• How close did Arthur get to Florida?
• "completed its conversion to an extratropical system at 12:00 UTC as it moved over the Bay of Fundy.[8] The NHC subsequently issued its final advisory on the storm and shifted warning responsibility to the Canadian Hurricane Centre,[27] which reported that Arthur came ashore at Meteghan at 10:30 UTC" - so did Arthur move ashore while tropical according to CHC? Or was it ET there too? Just trying to figure out timing.
• Why no mention of the 1901 storm whose record Arthur broke? (earliest NC hurricane) (per TCR)
• The rainfall map shows the heaviest rainfall occurring in South Carolina, but there is no mention of the state

All in all a great read! It should be easy to fix up. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 15:43, 7 June 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, Hink! I think I got to everything, but could you double check my math on the damage total? Not sure why I got a $10 mil difference now from earlier. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 16:42, 8 June 2015 (UTC)