Talk:I Don't Care (Cheryl song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 20:50, 18 April 2015 (UTC)

General

• One Dab Link

Info box

• Genres should be in alphabetical order

Lead

• , John Newman → , and John Newman
• which features breezy synthesizers and pumping bassline and lyrically sees Cheryl taking on a "fuck you" attitude to former lovers and critics. → which features breezy synthesizers, a pumping bassline and contains a "fuck you" lyrical sentiment.
• "fuck you" → fuck you
• Upon its release, → Not needed
• The song became a commercial success, debuting at → It debuted
• , giving Cheryl tenth number-one single, including those from when she was part of Girls Aloud, and fifth as a solo artist, making Cheryl the first and only English female to do this, overtaking then current record sharers Geri Halliwell and Rita Ora. → ,It became her fifth number-one as a solo artist, breaking her tie with Geri Halliwell and Rita Ora. It also became her tenth number-one song including those achieved with Girls Aloud.
• past collaborator → Not needed
• The music video was met with → It received
• ; the performance was questioned by fans and critics, who accused Cheryl of miming. → , which later drew accusations of lip-syncing.

Background

• Following the release of Cheryl's third studio album, A Million Lights, in June 2012 and embarking on her debut solo headlining tour, Cole confirmed that a Girls Aloud's reunion would occur in November 2012.[2][3] The group released their second greatest hits compilation, Ten on 26 November 2012 and In 2013, the group embarked on Ten: The Hits Tour.[4] In March 2013, following the completion of the tour, Girls Aloud released a statement via their official Twitter to confirm that they were splitting permanently.[5][6] → Not needed. "Crazy Stupid Love" might be better home for this perhaps as it was the first single and bares a little bit of relevance.

Chart performance

• It charted in other places than just the UK and Belgium, and this section should reflect that.
• her ninth number-one single → the lead says ten?

Live performance

• This is such a small section, that I would move it into the Music video section and re-name that section as Promotion

Remixes

• I'd also remove this section and instead put it at the end of Critical reception

Credits and personnel

• I'd make this two columns to reduce the amount of white space in the article.

External links

• Should be after References section

• References
• 2 is missing work
• 3 is missing accessdate
• Some have work and publisher, others just have publisher. I think it's generally accepted that publishers are not included in articles anymore
• 10 needs an accessdate, a date and to have Digital Spy not in italics
• 16 is missing work, date and accessdate
• 18 is missing work, date and accessdate
• 19 is missing date and accessdate
• 22 is missing work and accessdate
• 28 is missing date and accessdate
• 33 missing date an accessdate
• 34 missing date and accessdate

Outcome

Honestly, this article feels rushed. There are numerous basic errors in terms of grammar, factual information and referencing. I'm sorry but I'm failing this article.  — ₳aron 15:43, 26 April 2015 (UTC)

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