Talk:Internet real estate
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Me, Myself, and I are Here in topic Clarification
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Clarification
editThe lede has this sentence: "Internet real estate surfaced around 1999 when technology advanced and statistics prove that more than 1 million homes were sold by the owners themselves in just America, in 2000." Besides being a little awkward ("statistics prove", "in just"), the prose is not particularly clear: it doesn't say what technology it is, what exactly occurred in 2000 (statistics were collected or homes were sold), and if America refers to the United States or all of the Americas. Although the first and last items may be gleaned from context, a rewrite from someone with access to the original source would probably be helpful. Me, Myself & I (☮) (talk) 05:36, 19 March 2016 (UTC)