Talk:Jennifer Armstrong

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Pferrete in topic Correction

Article issues

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Subject seems notable but this article falls a long way short of meeting Wikipedia's standards. It was tagged as "reading like an advertisement" in June 2009 and it seems that no attempt has been made to improve it since then. It needs expansion, restructuring and rebalancing. It also needs to be sourced properly. If anyone would like to discuss this, please leave a message on my Talk page.--Plad2 (talk) 14:57, 27 February 2010 (UTC)Reply

I left something on your Talk page; but in regards to anyone else who finds this article, I've done one edit which inserted many more works by the author and some general information about her important works and will do a second momentarily which will re-insert previous information about Fire-Us. Since the series doesn't have its own page I figured it has to go somewhere, but if it sounds like it doesn't belong then you can revert it to the first edited version without losing too much. Hope it helps! Pferrete (talk) 04:41, 12 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

Correction

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Someone corrected "two open boats" to three; while I appreciate the correction, the original number was taken from the reference. If you can find a source with the correct number, please correct it then, but I don't think it would be right to cite the article with a different number than is written. Pferrete (talk) 00:55, 22 March 2012 (UTC)Reply