Talk:Jordan Williams (linebacker, born 1993)/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:52, 20 November 2017 (UTC)Reply


Will look at this article. Comments will be coming soon. MWright96 (talk) 20:52, 20 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • "Williams played in 44 games, starting 21," - Williams played in 44 games, of which he started 21,   Done
  • Wikilink sacks to Quarterback sack   Done
  • Do the same to practice squad   Done

Early years

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  • Fix the redirect links to middle linebacker to Linebacker#Middle linebacker and nose tackle to Defensive tackle#Nose tackle   Done
  • "His junior year," - During his junior year,   Done
  • "His senior season in 2010, he played at defensive end" - this piece of text should read as In Williams' senior season in 2010, he played at defensive end   Done
  • "He committed to Tennessee in October 2010." - spell this out a bit more: He committed to play college football for Tennessee in October 2010.   Done

College career

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  • Add the appropriate wikilinks to sacks and pass breakups   Done
  • "He appeared in ten games, with five starts," - reword to Williams appeared in ten games, of which he started in half of them,   Done
  • "Williams played in 44 games, starting 21, during his college career." - Throughout his college career, Williams played in 44 games and started 21 of them.   Done

New York Jets

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  • "He was released by the Jets on September 5 and signed to the team's practice squad on September 6, 2015." - change the text highlighted in bold so it reads the following day   Done

Miami Dolphins

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  • "He was released by the Dolphins on December 26 and signed to the team's practice squad 'on December 29, 2015." - three days later   Done
  • "He was released by the team on September 3 and signed to the Dolphins' practice squad on September 4, 2016." - the next day   Done

Personal life

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  • "Jordan's sister, Janine" - please don't use Jordan   Done
  • "Jordan held the first annual Jordan Williams Skills Camp on July 14, 2016." - same issue as above   Done

That's everything I could find in my reading of this article. On hold until all the queries have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 07:18, 21 November 2017 (UTC)Reply

Done. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:49, 22 November 2017 (UTC)Reply
@WikiOriginal-9: Okay then. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:56, 23 November 2017 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the review. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:58, 23 November 2017 (UTC)Reply