Talk:Just Dance (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Hello, I am Unionhawk. I will be reviewing this article. This is my first time with a GA review, so, if I make a mistake, accept apologies in advance. Anyway, let's get on this.

Criteria

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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Fix the lead up, and I think you have it.

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   Well done.

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   The lead needs more in-line citations. Everywhere else is great.

   C. No original research:

   The lead appears to have some OR... maybe

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

   It is stable, but I'm thinking once protection expires, it will become unstable, and subsequently reprotected.

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Like I said, there are issues with the lead, but not much more. You have 7 days. If you wish that I re-review before that 7 day period, leave me a message on my talk page.

I'm not entirely sure what appears as original research in the lead, as most of it is repeated in the main body of the article. I guess I must be missing it, so could you point it out instead? I have, however done some general copy editing. -- A ^talk/_contribs 04:17, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

I've taken a quick look at the article, to me it looks good. Reference #55 needs to be properly formatted, though. CarpetCrawler^{message me} 04:33, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

re: "Just Dance" review

Apparently, I was unclear about the lead. I'm saying that 2 in-line citations isn't enough for how long the lead is.--Unionhawk ^Talk 17:43, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Well... there's four in-line citations now. Nothing else is worth citing as it's repeated in the article and likely won't be challenged information. -- A ^talk/_contribs 19:04, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Fair enough. I did not know about that guideline before. If you are ready, let me know.--Unionhawk ^Talk 19:52, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Well, as I've just rid (definate) original research from lead I think we're ready. Thanks to fellow users for pointing out errors. -- A ^talk/_contribs 21:09, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

All right. I'll take a good look.--Unionhawk ^Talk 00:52, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Post On-Hold Review

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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After about 2 days of tweaks, and me learning one guideline, here's my review:

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

   Then again, what article isn't slightly unstable when unprotected?

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Good job on the GA. Congratulations.