Talk:Khawaja Asif

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Latest comment: 6 years ago by Saqib in topic Disqualification

BLP Concerns

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This article was listed on the BLP Noticeboard. I have reviewed the article and there are numerous sections which are unsourced. Unsourced material will eventually be removed from the article. The subject seems notable, and there are a lot of good references. It's NPOV for the most part. 97.126.235.119 (talk) 19:31, 18 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

The unsourced materials have been removed. Please use the template at the top of the article to search for sources for the content before adding it back into the article. 97.126.235.119 (talk) 19:38, 18 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

I'm going to work on copy editing

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It is going to require some heavy reworking of language throughout the article. Preemptively: There is no motivation behind any edits I will make other than the MOS. If a change I make sounds biased, please let me know. I'll fix it immediately. Jasphetamine (talk) 16:53, 28 January 2016 (UTC)Reply

I think it is mostly fixed up, i'm going to try to find someone to find the mistakes I made. Jasphetamine (talk) 23:51, 6 February 2016 (UTC)Reply
@Jasphetamine: I have improved the bio to very much extent but I think it need some copyediting, perhaps you may want to do it? I have plans to promote this one upto GA status. --Saqib (talk) 13:30, 22 July 2017 (UTC)Reply
@Saqib: Have you made a GOCE request? Let me know if you list this article so I can grab it. I'll start doing some copyediting soon either way. Thanks for the ping. Jasphetamine (talk) 03:37, 26 July 2017 (UTC)Reply

Disqualification

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Asif has been disqualified by the court but he's not denofied yet therefore he's still FM and member of the National Assembly until Election Commission denotify him. --Saqib (talk) 14:35, 26 April 2018 (UTC)Reply