Talk:Nike Zeus/GA1
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Latest comment: 10 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 22:36, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:36, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
- No DABs, one dead link that needs to be fixed.
- Images appropriately licensed.
- Overlinking on neutron bomb, Strategic Air Command, state of the art, MIM-3 Nike Ajax.
- The relationship between Bell and Douglas is a bit unclear. Bell acted as the general contractor/integrator while Douglas designed and built the missiles?
- Put the title of Bethe in title case.
- There's no apostrophe in Falls Church
- Fix the italicization in Garvin and Bethe.
- Need page numbers for #41 and 42
- use pp. notation for #5--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:36, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
All of this is fixed except: (1) what link?, (5) I don't see this anywhere, (6) Can't find, don't need, (7) doesn't work with that tag. Maury Markowitz (talk) 17:44, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
- Run the external links tool in the toolbox.
- In the Bibliography.
- Note #34
- Note #42 does have page numbers available. You're right about #41.
- Can't get the pages to display properly for #5 either.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:59, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
- I don't have "external links" in my toolbar. Only DYK Check, but that didn't seem to highlight anything.
- There should be an external link check tool in the review toolbox to the upper right, but the entire toolbox isn't showing right now.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:03, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
- I guess someone fixed Bethe already?
- 42 doesn't have page numbers in my copy, are you seeing another one? A PDF perhaps?
- Maury Markowitz (talk) 22:50, 2 July 2014 (UTC)
- Nevermind.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:03, 3 July 2014 (UTC)
- I don't have "external links" in my toolbar. Only DYK Check, but that didn't seem to highlight anything.
IP here!
- "The Army's medium-range Jupiter missile gave the Air Force fits"?!!! Not sure this is encyclopaedic language! 129.11.76.229 (talk) 09:44, 19 June 2014 (UTC)
- Good point.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:35, 26 June 2014 (UTC)
- Changed. Maury Markowitz (talk) 22:45, 2 July 2014 (UTC)