Talk:MSC Malaysia
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Editing
editI edited some of the passages as an attempt to make the article more neutral. For instance:
It is transforming the way in which business was conducted - it enables businesses to become more adaptive and responsive. The E-Biz aims to provide more efficient and better quality services to the community, and encourage the business and community to accept electronic business as an integral part of their daily lives.
to:
Its objective is to transform the way in which business was conducted - it enables businesses to become more adaptive and responsive. The E-Biz aims to provide more efficient and better quality services to the community, and encourage the business and community to accept electronic business as an integral part of their daily lives.
In this sense, the article should not be seen to state that 'it does what it says to be doing' when this is not very certain to some people.
I am aware of criticisms towards the current implementation of MSC but I don't have the sources right now.
Questionable
editAs above, large amounts of this articel seem to strangely phrased, and whole paragraphs are unwikified. 68.39.174.238 00:25, 8 January 2007 (UTC)
fundings
editHi there, MSC is giving out a lot of fundings like Pre Seed, Technopreneur and so on. Can we add those info here so that it helps Malaysians to find out about that? cdtavijit 02:16, 08 August 2007 (UTC)
Official Name
editMultimedia Super Corridor is no more. Now the official name is MSC Malaysia. I need somebody who know to change the redirect the page title to MSC Malaysia. Thanks. Escabyte 16:57, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
multimedia in various field
edithow multimedia technology can be use in health, education,and business? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 218.111.231.2 (talk) 23:05, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
Text copied from a brochure?
editThis article reads like a (bad) advertising brochure: "MSC Malaysia is all about adding values to your business." "We produce creative and strategic solutions that cater to all ICT sectors and all ICT clusters." Terrible! 201.250.15.98 (talk) 07:10, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
Have edited
editI have edited some of the worst excesses of advert-speak, and injected two of the many criticisms. Think more work needs to be done though. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 58.110.185.220 (talk) 05:10, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
- You changed "people" to "cards." What does that mean? DaronDierkes (talk) 06:02, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
- Ah, I have looked at the context and understand now. Good edits. DaronDierkes (talk) 06:04, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
Removed large block of brochure-speak
editI have removed the following (formatting ignored), which is
- not cited
- obviously biased
- written in first-person
- is primarily sales text with links to website
<redacting: material copyrighted> --Marktristan (talk) 18:32, 16 July 2008 (UTC)
Copyright problem removed
editOne or more portions of this article duplicated other source(s). The material was copied from: http://www.eurosoutheastasia-ict.org/docs/ICT_MBD_EuroMalaysia.pdf http://www.mscmalaysia.my/topic/Capability+Development+Programmes http://www.ittutor.net/forums/index.php?showtopic=19050. Infringing material has been rewritten or removed and must not be restored, unless it is duly released under a compatible license. (For more information, please see "using copyrighted works from others" if you are not the copyright holder of this material, or "donating copyrighted materials" if you are.) For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or published material; such additions will be deleted. Contributors may use copyrighted publications as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences or phrases. Accordingly, the material may be rewritten, but only if it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Please see our guideline on non-free text for how to properly implement limited quotations of copyrighted text. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously, and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. While we appreciate contributions, we must require all contributors to understand and comply with these policies. Thank you. Moonriddengirl (talk) 18:14, 14 December 2009 (UTC)
Translate and integrate from Malay Wikipedia
editThis article contains a translation of Koridor Raya Multimedia from ms.wikipedia. |
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