Talk:Magnum P.I. (2018 TV series) season 3/GA1
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Latest comment: 3 years ago by TheDoctorWho in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:50, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Infobox looks good.
- "also become a co-showrunner" → "also became a co-showrunner"
Cast and characters
edit- No problems here.
Episodes
edit- "Rick, T.C. and Katsumoto" → "Rick, T.C., and Katsumoto"
- The sentence "Meanwhile, Higgins expresses concern after a first date with her surgeon that he is 'too perfect,'" needs rewording.
- "Magnum and T.C." → "Magnum, and T.C."
Crossovers
edit- "early 2020 numerous actors" → "early 2020, numerous actors"
Production
edit- "who also co-developed the series and is an executive producer for the series" → "who also co-developed and executive-produced for the series".
- "start date.[31] September 14, was later" → "start date;[31] September 14 was later"
- "on the set crowd" → "on the set, crowd"
- A better, secondary source is needed for Kurt Jones joining the series.
- "Roger E. Mosley who portrayed" → "Roger E. Mosley, who portrayed"
- "Dennis Chun who" → "Dennis Chun, who"
- Remove the space in-between the two references after "introduced in the first season".
Marketing and release
edit- "Blue Bloods" links to a disambiguation page. Fix the link to Blue Bloods.
Viewing figures
edit- This section looks good.
- Some +7 ratings are already available here.
References
edit- Using this tool, or doing it manually, archive all archivable sources (citations from the Futon Critic can be archived using this).
Overview
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edit- @TheDoctorWho: Happy to do the review! I'll be adding comments later in the day. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 12:50, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
- @TheDoctorWho: I have just finished adding most, if not all my notes. This article is well-written, but has some small issues to address. Please leave comments, and ping me back when you have done so. I hope I can promote this article soon. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 14:51, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Caroline: Everything should be taken care of, I couldn't find a better source for Jones coming from Five-0 so I removed it for now, hopefully something better comes out when his directorial debut episode airs. Thanks, TheDoctorWho (talk) 06:16, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: re-pinging to fix typo above. TheDoctorWho (talk) 06:56, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
- Just now remembering I forgot to archive references, I'll get to that in the morning. TheDoctorWho (talk) 08:13, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Sorry it took me so long, IABot was down this morning, everything has been archived so that should address all of your concerns. Thanks, TheDoctorWho (talk) 23:28, 30 January 2021 (UTC)