Talk:Majestic-class battleship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:11, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:11, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

@Sturmvogel 66: - any progress on this? Parsecboy (talk) 17:44, 20 August 2015 (UTC)

Maybe before the end of the month, but no promises. Locked in a heated battle in the WP:Stub Contest--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:49, 20 August 2015 (UTC)

Fair enough - good luck getting that voucher ;) Parsecboy (talk) 19:04, 20 August 2015 (UTC)

Dude just tripled my entire month's work and I'm just about out of ship stubs to do in bulk, so here I am.

• no DABs, external link good.
• Photos appropriately licensed.
• Usual sort of infobox stuff. Add power line w/ boilers and ihp, link VTE steam engines, simplify torpedo description. Since the guns are linked probably don't need caliber length provided that that info is in the armament para.
  • Should all be fixed now.
• I know what you're trying to say here Japanese Shikishima and Mikasa classes, but it's a bit problematic since Mikasa was a singleton.
  • Yeah, I hadn't been very happy with that line when I wrote it. See if what I changed it to is too clunky.
    • This looks to be unchanged.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:10, 1 September 2015 (UTC)
      • Whoops, I fixed it in the lead and forgot to do the body. Parsecboy (talk) 15:36, 1 September 2015 (UTC)
• Be consisted about abbreviating measurements in the main body, right now I see 12 in and 12-inch.
  • Should all be standardized now
• Some kind soul has added a link for naval citadel [[Citadel#Naval term|citadel]] that you should add and remember for later. And same for [[ship motions|roll]]
  • That's pretty handy.
• Move link to conning tower to first appearance
  • Done
• Add links for freeboard, caliber length and or note for /40 nomenclature, QF.
  • All done.
• Watch for rounding errors in measurements. 18 inches is the only one I've noticed so far, though.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:56, 28 August 2015 (UTC)
  • Fixed the one 18" - I had forgotten to manually do that one. Parsecboy (talk) 12:27, 31 August 2015 (UTC)
    • Did a little bit of cleanup to expedite things, but you still forgot about the unexplained /40 for the 6-inch guns.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:09, 1 September 2015 (UTC)
      • Don't forget about this.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:50, 1 September 2015 (UTC)
        • Done, thanks. Parsecboy (talk) 17:04, 1 September 2015 (UTC)