Talk:Maneater (2007 film)/GA1
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Looking good. Only a very few comments:
- the first six films in the series actually premiered on various video on demand channels months ahead of its Sci Fi airing - "films" is plural so "its" should be their.
- "video-on-demand" and "video on demand" are used inconsistently.
- but felt they were depicted in a such an extreme manor that they were simply boring - "manor" should be "manner"; "but" should also be "and" because this clause doesn't really contradict the previous one, it follows on.
- Link DVD Talk.
As these are only very minor issues, I'm happy to pass the article now assuming that you'll take care of these - well done! —97198 (talk) 06:10, 12 November 2008 (UTC)
- All fixed and thanks! :) -- AnmaFinotera (talk · contribs) 06:31, 12 November 2008 (UTC)