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Russian vs Soviet
editI corrected this article's incorrect use of the term 'Russian' when 'Soviet [Union]' was clearly meant. It amazes me that people who obsess about minute technical details continue to get this wrong over and over and over and over again. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 194.44.223.44 (talk) 07:56, 15 August 2010 (UTC)
Helium/Oxygen Atmosphere
editI don't know if the Air Force guys were nuts? Isn't helium/oxygen gas mixtures used in deep-sea diving? I wonder if it was chosen delibertaly so that the MOL astronaut sound like "Alvin and the Chipmunks" (watch the diving crews for the U.S.S. Monitor programs on the Discovery Channel). At least the Soviet Almaz military space station and the Skylab space station used oxygen/nitrogen, with the former at sea-level pressure and Skylab at a 3:1 ratio (3 parts oxygen to 1 part nitrogen). Rwboa22 01:40, 13 March 2007 (UTC)
Secret aspects?
editThis article doesn't even mention that aspects of this program were closely guarded secrets at the time. All I know about this subject is what I saw on Nova, so I'm reluctant to write much about this myself. ike9898 (talk) 14:28, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
Picture of th 14 astronauts
editYou have the names of the astronauts listed but were wrong on one of them. The bottom row left, first person is Col. Lachlan Macleay, USAF and not Lt Commander John Finley. If nothing else you can tell the difference in the uniform. Col. Macleay is in the USAF. Also Finley left in 1968, and could not be in this picture if the replacement 1968 class in this picture (other than Robert Lawrence who had already died in a plane crash.) Check PBS program Astrospies for details. —Preceding unsigned comment added by AnnieAF (talk • contribs) 07:49, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
intended orbit
editThe article claims that the intended orbit was to be polar (which makes sense for a reconnaissance mission), however it also claims that the intended launch site was to be Cape Canaveral. Is there a reference that supports this? Cape Canaveral is normally not used for launches with polar inclinations. That is normally done at Vandenburg due to the increased risk of overflight over populated areas of the east coast at Canaveral. Was the editor here making the assumption that since the one and only test launch of MOL was done at Cape Canaveral that missions would be launched from there as well? --RadioFan (talk) 13:52, 15 August 2010 (UTC)
Orphaned references in Manned Orbital Laboratory
editI check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Manned Orbital Laboratory's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.
Reference named "astrospies":
- From Lachlan Macleay: "Astrospies". NOVA. PBS. 2007. Retrieved 2008-10-10.
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ignored (help) - From Almaz: "Astrospies". NOVA.
- From Richard E. Lawyer: "Astrospies web site". NOVA. PBS. 2007. Retrieved 2008-07-27.
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I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡ 14:11, 15 August 2010 (UTC)
- Apologies accepted bot. They are essentially identical. Title differences are in significant.--RadioFan (talk) 14:39, 15 August 2010 (UTC)
Failed verification in lead
editThe "NASA Archives on MOL" PDF document that was used in two places as the first citation reference, says nothing at all about the X-20 DynaSoar, the Air Force, reconnaissance, or any other military use of the stations described. Therefore, I don't see how it can be used to verify the two statements to which it was linked. The phrase "manned orbital laboratory" does not seem to be used in context of an official program name, so the statement of that being the original name is suspect as well. All this document proves, is that NASA studied some space station concepts in 1963, mentioning the use of Gemini as a shuttle vehicle. I kept it as an external link, because it's of related interest, of course.
We really need some authoritative, Air Force documentation for verification (though this is understandably hard to come by, given its military nature.) JustinTime55 (talk) 15:57, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
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edit- Copyvio check. That's fine. Its a 21% but it is common terms, e.g. names of things. Fine. Done
Prose
editI have read the article 8 times now, the spelling is good, layout is good and coverage of content, having read up on it, seems fairly comprehensive at the moment. scope_creepTalk 20:42, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
Lead
editnever-flown part
. Can that re-clarified with a better description, as you havelaunched on 3 November 1966
at the bottom. Apart from that, it is really decent. Possibly re-craft it. It could best it is at the moment. I don't know. It sound a wee bit odd, but it might be me. "It was a never flown part"??- Tweaked the wording to indicate that the OPS 0855 was an uncrewed test flight of Gemini B, and that it was the Titan IIIM rocket that never flew. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:47, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
- It's still not right. It doesn't read correctly as your saying something in the first para, and then saying the reverse in the third para. You will need to clarify it by rewording it slightly.
- Removed text to avoid giving this impression. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:52, 28 June 2020 (UTC)
- It's still not right. It doesn't read correctly as your saying something in the first para, and then saying the reverse in the third para. You will need to clarify it by rewording it slightly.
- Tweaked the wording to indicate that the OPS 0855 was an uncrewed test flight of Gemini B, and that it was the Titan IIIM rocket that never flew. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:47, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
- That reads much better and flows better along with new layout. I mean it was pretty decent at the beginning, but it is better now. Done
Background
editThe launch of Sputnik 1, the first satellite, by the Soviet Union on 4 October 1957, came as a profound shock to the American public, which had complacently assumed American technical superiority, and sparked a search for initiatives to counter its psychological impact
Its a long sentence. Is it possible to take out one American and reorder. Give an ownership, e.g in their technical superiority, and sparked a...- Reduced the sentence size by removing the second clause, which lost its relevance. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done
most forms of human space flight
I'm left wondering what was left out?- Dyna-Soar is mentioned later in the paragraph. There was a lot of negotiation about what was meant, as it involved transferring funds to NASA, the demarcation between civil and military uses of space was unclear, and just what NASA wanted to do was undefined. In the end, major transfers included MISS, the Jet Propulsion Laboratory and the Army Ballistic Missile Agency, but this took place over a period of several years. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
transferred $53.8 million (equivalent to $367 million in 2018)
Somebody mentioned inflation template, might be worth using. I don't know what nick its in. Surprising to say the least.- You're looking at it. This text is generated by the inflation template. Note that for defence and R&D projected, we use the GDP rather than CPI as deflator. The year will automatically go up from 2018 when someone gets around to uploading more data. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
including Man in Space Soonest to NASA
Is there a link or a clarification?- Man in Space Soonest? Of course, but since it is no longer mentioned earlier, I have deleted it from here. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done
- Man in Space Soonest? Of course, but since it is no longer mentioned earlier, I have deleted it from here. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
The same 22 February memorandum tacit approval for the development of a space station
gave tacit approval- Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done
- Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
Program 287
As its a name- Not sure what you want here. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- Surround with "Program 287" unless it is a number scheme of some kind. Which probably what it is?
- Yes. For funding tracking purposes, each program was allocated a number. For example, we have articles on Program 35, Program 279 and Program 437. Added words to this effect as a short explanation. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:47, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
- Surround with "Program 287" unless it is a number scheme of some kind. Which probably what it is?
- Not sure what you want here. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
McNamara
Doesn't seem to be linked.- Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- Everybody knows who he is, I suppose. Done
- Added. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
Planning
edit"white" experiments
What are these? Can it be linked somehow, or clarified?- Added "i.e. unclassified and publicly acknowledged, as opposed to "black" secret and unacknowledged". As there were 59 of them, I decided not to list. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- It seems to be a know thing with military. It is black money, black funds, black projects and on and on. Done
- Added "i.e. unclassified and publicly acknowledged, as opposed to "black" secret and unacknowledged". As there were 59 of them, I decided not to list. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- I was a little surprised that it was officially called that. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:47, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
Brigadier General Russell A. Berg
Link this.- Linked. (Looks like I cleaned it up.) Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
Done
Black Financial Procedures
Can you clarify this.- The paragraph goes on to say what the procedure was. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- That's fine. Done
White Financial Procedures Agreement
What exactly are these? Some clarification is needed.- The same, but for the white budget. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done As long as the reader understands what it is.
black funds
Link this.- Linked to Black budget. The article gives a short exp0lanation as well. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- That's cool. Seems to be two article with slightly different domain, but almost identical. Done
(GSE/TD)
Get rid. Not used.- Removed. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done
Douglas selected four major subcontractors
Seems to six??- Five. Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done
Aerospace and the MOL.
sitting alone, all lonely.- Deleted. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- It has been linked to another sentence. Coolio. Done
Aerospace and the MOL. Aerospace concurred with all but the last, noting..
Got that, took 30 seconds. Can you rewrite it.- Deleted the stray text. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- This is the one has been linked. Forget that. Done
Modules
editLaboratory module
edit- Done
Spacecraft
editthrusters
Is it worth linking thrusters. There is an article of sorts, Thrusters (spacecraft).- Linked. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done
- Linked. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
Spacesuits
editHamilton Standard
Is that the right company? According to the article it a manufacturer of propellers. Parts supplier. Unlike the other three, there is no mention of material design, or suit design.- Seems to be, but terrible article. No mention of suit design, spacecraft design going on for decades.
- Yes, it is. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- ":Thats ok. More a comment. Done
- Seems to be, but terrible article. No mention of suit design, spacecraft design going on for decades.
Astronauts
editSelection
edit- Done
Training
edit- Done
Facilities
editLaunch complex
editmobile services Tower
Uppercase Tower?- De-capped. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- Done
- De-capped. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
segment receipt inspection building and ready building
What are these? Kind of make sense, but odd sounding?- The different components of the spacecraft (segments) arrived from different manufacturers and had to be assembled. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- I had a look at the second time. Done
- The different components of the spacecraft (segments) arrived from different manufacturers and had to be assembled. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:18, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
Easter Island
editDone
Rochester
editDone
Test flight
editDone
Soviet responses
editDone
Delays and cost increases
editDone
Cancellation
editHe directed Director
the?- Added "the". Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:06, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- Better reading. Done
Secretary of the Air Force
can this be linked, if not already liked.- Already linked above. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:06, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
- Thats ok. Close. Done
Legacy
editDone
Mos
editI've had a good look through this. I can't see anything that immediately stands out. I spent some time over the weekend comparing the article to the WP:MOS, on line by line basis and think it is OK. There is nothing glaring. I think is done. Done
Ref layout
editThis is fine. Done
RS Refs
editHi @Hawkeye7: This seems to be bloggish, work of one person? [1] The military documents, memo's and so on are fine.
- It's the online Encyclopedia Astronautica. The site has won multiple awards, and Mark Wade is generally considered an expert. He has published articles on space exploration. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:01, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
- Coolio. Done
OR
editNot a chance. Done
Pics
edit- The vertical MOL diagram for the configuration image. The colouring, design, resolution and size are pretty poor. The [2] has a breakdown. Would it be worth creating a new image?
- Yes, but we cannot use that one, which is copyrighted. It could be omitted from the infobox entirely. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:06, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
- I wonder if that is for the best. You already have the Integral launch dual compartment laboratory image, which clearly shows the compartmental breakdown and in much better detail, to be honest. You know, combined with that second image, it might not be too bad. The second image more than enough info. Yip, keep it. It is in-focus. Done
- The image of General Bernard Adolph Schriever. It quite small image and when it opened its quite blurry. It seems there is three public domain images available. There is one on the main article, at 257k, which is in perfect focus. What is your thoughts?
- Switched pix. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:06, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
- That's cool. I can see him. Done
Broadness
editI found a couple of extra papers. One paper interesting, Manned Orbiting Laboratory-for War or Peace? at [3]. Another at [4] Both of seem to be outside the archive.
It is comprehensive and heavily sourced. Done
Focus
editI have read six MOL type articles and they are all identical. Done
Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Amkgp (talk) 14:10, 15 September 2020 (UTC)
- ...
that the 3 November 1966 test flight of a Gemini B spacecraft for the Manned Orbiting Laboratory project (pictured) was the first time an American spacecraft intended for human spaceflight had flown in space twice?Source: "The only space launch in the MOL program occurred on Nov. 3, 1966, when a Titan-IIIC rocket took off from Cape Canaveral Air Force Station’s (CCAFS) Launch Complex 40. Atop the rocket was a MOL mockup, without the KH-10 imaging payload, and a Gemini-B capsule that was refurbished after it flew NASA’s uncrewed Gemini-2 suborbital mission in January 1965. This was the only time an American spacecraft intended for human spaceflight was reflown until the advent of the Space Shuttle." ([5])- ALT1:
... that a test flight of a Gemini B spacecraft on 3 November 1996 (pictured) was the only space launch of the Manned Orbiting Laboratory project?Source: same
- ALT1:
Improved to Good Article status by Hawkeye7 (talk). Self-nominated at 11:53, 17 July 2020 (UTC).
- Hello Hawkeye7 I'll be undertaking a review of this nomination. I would like to start with the reference, which appeared (at least at one time) to cite reference #118 (Berger) when it is actually your #92 (NASA - "50 years ago...). Perhaps I'm just reading that wrong, so set me straight if you would. Gulbenk (talk) 01:45, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
- I don't understand what you are asking... the quoted source covers the hooks, and is the same one used in the article [92] in the Test Flight section. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 02:11, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
- The previous question had to do with a display issue, evidently originating on the nominations page since I see the same anomaly using separate computers. Whatever it is, it's not part of your original nomination, so it doesn't pertain to the quality of your submission. I have reviewed your nomination with the following findings: Recently upgraded to Good Article, long enough, well written, the first hook conforms to article text and reference, sufficiently interesting. I would go with the first hook. However, it appears that the QPQ is still open for additional discussion. We can approve this article once the QPQ situation is resolved. Gulbenk (talk) 15:20, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
- Swapped the QPQ for another one. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 18:22, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
- The previous question had to do with a display issue, evidently originating on the nominations page since I see the same anomaly using separate computers. Whatever it is, it's not part of your original nomination, so it doesn't pertain to the quality of your submission. I have reviewed your nomination with the following findings: Recently upgraded to Good Article, long enough, well written, the first hook conforms to article text and reference, sufficiently interesting. I would go with the first hook. However, it appears that the QPQ is still open for additional discussion. We can approve this article once the QPQ situation is resolved. Gulbenk (talk) 15:20, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
- I don't understand what you are asking... the quoted source covers the hooks, and is the same one used in the article [92] in the Test Flight section. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 02:11, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
- Hello Hawkeye7 I'll be undertaking a review of this nomination. I would like to start with the reference, which appeared (at least at one time) to cite reference #118 (Berger) when it is actually your #92 (NASA - "50 years ago...). Perhaps I'm just reading that wrong, so set me straight if you would. Gulbenk (talk) 01:45, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
- Good to go with substitute QPQ Olga Yurievskaya. Gulbenk (talk) 19:30, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
- Hawkeye7 Gulbenk Should the article be using the dates as Month Day, Year per it being an American spacecraft? SL93 (talk) 05:25, 11 August 2020 (UTC)
- As a military article, it uses military date format (WP:MILFORMAT). NASA also uses dates in this format. So all the sources do, which made it easier to write. The article dates were set to DMY back in 2014, six years before I began revising it. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 05:47, 11 August 2020 (UTC)
- Perfect. Restoring tick. SL93 (talk) 05:47, 11 August 2020 (UTC)
- I reopened this per the discussion at Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Prep 1:Spaceflight. SL93 (talk) 17:45, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
- Perfect. Restoring tick. SL93 (talk) 05:47, 11 August 2020 (UTC)
- As a military article, it uses military date format (WP:MILFORMAT). NASA also uses dates in this format. So all the sources do, which made it easier to write. The article dates were set to DMY back in 2014, six years before I began revising it. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 05:47, 11 August 2020 (UTC)
- Hawkeye7 Gulbenk Should the article be using the dates as Month Day, Year per it being an American spacecraft? SL93 (talk) 05:25, 11 August 2020 (UTC)
- Would this re-wording of ALT0 work?
- ALT2 ... that a 1966 test flight of a Gemini B spacecraft for the Manned Orbiting Laboratory (pictured) was the first time an American space capsule intended for human spaceflight had flown in space twice?
- As far as I can tell, the point of the hook is that the capsule in question had flown to space before, but as I said in the WT:DYK discussion the original wording seemed ambiguous since the "American spacecraft flew twice" wording didn't make it clear that it was only referring to that specific vessel (and the phrasing could have been misinterpreted to be referring to a spacecraft class in general). I'm not sure if ALT2 addresses my concern since coming up with a more precise wording seemed difficult, so additional ideas could be discussed here. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:13, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
- Ambiguity is completely acceptable in hooks. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:20, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- Hello. I was asked to weigh on this one. First, congratulations on taking MOL to GA! It's an important part of American history. Second, I don't like this DYK hook at all. I'd rather see a DYK that focuses on MOL; the DYK as it is would be better suited for an article on Gemini B or OV 3-4. To that end, I propose:
ALT3: ... that the Manned Orbiting Laboratory was the first American crewed space station project?--Neopeius (talk) 14:12, 16 August 2020 (UTC)- That wouldn't be able to use the image. A bigger problem though is that it doesn't appear in the article anywhere. We would need a source for this hook. I think it's true, as MODS dated back to 1959, and planning for Skylab did not get under way until 1962. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
- I think the image would be fine -- it looks like a MOL launch (would have). :) You could do something like "...MOL was an early space station project that would have utilized the USAF's Titan 3 and NASA's Gemini spacecraft?" --Neopeius (talk) 03:22, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
- If ALT2 were to be used the hook could be written as "... that the Manned Orbital Laboratory (test flight pictured)" or something to that effect. Personally it feels like a better option to me than the Titan/Gemini proposal since the latter would assume readers are familiar with the Titan rocket an is also a more technical hook. A third option could be a hook about how the project was promoted with non-reconnaissance objectives but was in reality a glorified spy satellite. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:27, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
- I think the image would be fine -- it looks like a MOL launch (would have). :) You could do something like "...MOL was an early space station project that would have utilized the USAF's Titan 3 and NASA's Gemini spacecraft?" --Neopeius (talk) 03:22, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
- That wouldn't be able to use the image. A bigger problem though is that it doesn't appear in the article anywhere. We would need a source for this hook. I think it's true, as MODS dated back to 1959, and planning for Skylab did not get under way until 1962. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:13, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
- The reason I thought the original would be interesting is the recent flight flight of the reusable Crew Dragon Demo-2. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 02:54, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
- Hi Narutolovehinata5 Hawkeye7, any progress on this? VincentLUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 09:17, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- I'm still waiting for a response from the nominator regarding my comments about additional hook suggestions. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:25, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- ALT3 was rejected. Recommend proceeding with ALT2 or the approved original hook. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:20, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- ALT0 was already rejected (i.e. pulled) so that appears to be a non-starter. Although I proposed the ALT2 wording, I don't think the phrasing is unambiguous enough to work. Perhaps a different direction is needed now. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:40, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- Recommend going with ALT2 then. Being unambiguous is highly undesirable in DYK hooks. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:04, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- ALT0 was already rejected (i.e. pulled) so that appears to be a non-starter. Although I proposed the ALT2 wording, I don't think the phrasing is unambiguous enough to work. Perhaps a different direction is needed now. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:40, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- ALT3 was rejected. Recommend proceeding with ALT2 or the approved original hook. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:20, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- I'm still waiting for a response from the nominator regarding my comments about additional hook suggestions. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:25, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- Hi Narutolovehinata5 Hawkeye7, any progress on this? VincentLUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 09:17, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- The reason I thought the original would be interesting is the recent flight flight of the reusable Crew Dragon Demo-2. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 02:54, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
- From experience that's not the case. Several hooks in the past have been rejected or pulled due to concerns that they were too vague or inaccurate. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 01:10, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
How about
- ALT4
... that a 1966 test flight of a Gemini B spacecraft for the Manned Orbiting Laboratory (pictured) flew to La Salle?— Preceding unsigned comment added by Hawkeye7 (talk • contribs) 01:09, 27 August 2020 (UTC)- Probably too misleading; misleading hooks are usually discouraged unless they run on April Fool's Day. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:51, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- You are not a reviewer. Go away. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 13:19, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- Probably too misleading; misleading hooks are usually discouraged unless they run on April Fool's Day. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:51, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- ALT4
- It appears that new input is needed here. Requesting a new reviewer for ALT2/ALT4. Courtesy ping to previous commentors @Gulbenk, SL93, Yoninah, Neopeius, and Vincent60030: Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 13:57, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- One final comment: If ALT2 or a variant is to be used, it should be made clear that the MOL capsule was the first orbital American spacecraft to fly to space more than once; an X-15 rocket plane had previously flown multiple suborbital flights prior to that. Perhaps the use of "space capsule" as opposed to "spacecraft" should help things, but this is still something to keep in mind. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 14:11, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- ALT5
... that the Manned Orbiting Laboratory (pictured) could have been the world's first manned space station?--evrik (talk) 02:56, 30 August 2020 (UTC)- For a real project with a real picture, ALT5 is too iffy. Yoninah (talk) 13:05, 13 September 2020 (UTC)
- ALT5
- Recommend going with ALT2. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:02, 13 September 2020 (UTC)
- We've had enough discussion here and ALT2 appears to be both the nominator's choice and the best choice. Hawkeye7, please add an inline cite to this sentence in the article:
This was the first time an American spacecraft intended for human spaceflight had flown in space twice, albeit without a crew.
and I'll approve this. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 10:27, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
- We've had enough discussion here and ALT2 appears to be both the nominator's choice and the best choice. Hawkeye7, please add an inline cite to this sentence in the article:
- Thank you. ALT2 hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Gulbenk. ALT2 good to go, ideally with image. Yoninah (talk) 11:11, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
Merger discussion
editThe article at KH-10 Dorian should be merged into Manned Orbiting Laboratory. They're clearly referring to the same spacecraft and the presence of the KH-10 Dorian article is confusing.
- Support. They are the same spacecraft,[1] and there is nothing in this article that is not covered in the Manned Orbiting Laboratory article. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:56, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
- Converted to a redirect. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:02, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
- ^ (Stewart, James T. (14 February 1968). "Designation of MOL as the KH-10 Photographic Reconnaissance Satellite System" (PDF). National Reconnaissance Office. Retrieved 9 April 2020.