Talk:Mexican National Atómicos Championship/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:12, 21 May 2020 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 13:12, 21 May 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "The title is a national title," - repetition of "title"
• "In early 2009 reigning champions," - early 2009, the reigning champions,

Championship rules

• "The title is a national title" - same issue as the first point raised in the lead section
• "As is the case for all the Mexican National titles," - every Mexican national title,
• "The championship is also an Atómicos championship," - repetition of "championship"
• "it meant that officially non-Mexican citizens were prohibited from challenging or holding the championship," - it offically prohibited non-Mexican citizens from challenging or holding the championship,
• "which means there is no champion at that point in time." - holder
• "or real-life issues like a champion suffering an injury" - such as

History

• "The first champions were crowned after an eight-team tournament that saw Pierroth Jr., Villano III, Villano IV, and Villano V become the inaugural champions" - winners
• "Over the next couple of years" - How many years exactly?
• "trade the championship between the two teams." - typo; should be traded
• "won the championship, ending the Los Vipers/Los Vatos Locos dominance of the championship. [t]" - title
• Plus the note in the sentence above should not have a space between it and the period to end the sentence
• "kicking off a 789-day reign." - beginning
• "only for a reorganized Black Family, now known as La Secta del Mesias ("The Sect of the Messiah"), won the championship on May 20, 2007." - to claim the title
• "in storyline terms because they attacked Vampiro after winning the championship." - in a storyline where they attacked
• "such as the atómicos championship," - the word in bold should be italized

Reigns

• "left AAA in the fall of 1996." - avoid using seasons per MOS:SEASON
• "the championship was inactive for over a year until a tournament" - more than a year

Mexican National Atómicos Championship tournament (1996)

• "Documentation for the full brackets of the tournament has not been found documented," - the word in bold isn't needed
• "but based on the results 10 teams competed in the tournament to determine the first-ever champions." - inaugural
• "After initial rounds on August 3 and August 4, 1996," - the inital rounds of August 3 to 4,
• "on their way to the finals." - en route
• "first round" in the able should begin with capital letters with the first letter only

Mexican National Atómicos Championship tournament (1998)

• All mentions of the word Atómicos in this section should be capalized
• "and for approximately a year and a half" - 1½ years
• "In round two, on August 13, 198," - the year isn't needed since it is already mentioned in this paragraph
• "In round two," - the next round,

Title history

• "and Dark Ozz (3))" - only one closing parentheses is needed

References

• Reference 8 should have Ernesto OCampo as the author not Super Luchasstaff
• Reference 9 should have Jorge OCampo as the author not SUper Luchas staff

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 07:40, 22 May 2020 (UTC)

• MWright96 - Addressed all but one comment. (Dark Cuervo (3), Dark Escoria (3), Dark Espíritu (2) and Dark Ozz (3)) for the (3)), the first ) closes the (3) and the second one closes the parenthesis that starts before Dark Cuero. Everything else has been adjusted, thanks. MPJ-DK (talk) 14:07, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
  • @MPJ-DK: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 18:14, 22 May 2020 (UTC)