Talk:Miksang

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Coconutporkpie in topic Unencyclopedic tone

Unencyclopedic tone

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Phrases like: "a peculiar and open way of seeing the world", "back to a purer perception of reality that is often neglected", and "in the proper state of mind, of everyday's reality" present opinions as facts where they should be attributed (Wikipedia:Citing Sources#In-text attribution) to the author of whatever source text was used, as should other uses of indirect speech, such as "tends to bring the observer back into the original contemplation state". —Coconutporkpie (talk) 23:30, 2 December 2015 (UTC)Reply