Talk:Mixes (Kylie Minogue album)/GA2

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 16:11, 8 March 2016 (UTC)

• It was released on 3 August 1998, by record label Deconstruction Records --> remove "record label"
• The music was influenced by various genres of dance music, such as electronica and dance-pop --> I believe you mean the remixes were influenced?
• Originally scheduled for a 1999 release, Deconstruction released Mixes in the United Kingdom in August 1998 after releasing the Australian counterpart Impossible Remixes (1998) earlier than its original date --> The album was originally scheduled for a 1999 release, but Deconstruction pre-poned the release date of Mixes in the United Kingdom to August 1998, since the Australian counterpart, Impossible Remixes (1998), had been released earlier than its original date.
• It received minimal promotion by Minogue's standards. --> This is wP:OR since the body does not mention it
• The Brothers in Rhythm remix of "Too Far" was released as a promotional single in the UK and North America --> Promotional single releases are not listed in the infobox.
• In November 1997, Minogue released her sixth studio album Impossible Princess --> In November 1997, Minogue released her sixth studio album, Impossible Princess.
• A comma before Intimate and Live.
• Minogue intended to only perform in Australia, but strong public demand in the United Kingdom prompt Minogue to tour there too --> Minogue intended to only perform in Australia, but strong public demand in the United Kingdom prompted her to schedule dates there.
• Mixes was released on 3 August 1997 in the UK --> 1997 or 1998?
• Mushroom released Impossible Remixes on 8 July 1998, but initial pressings were on sale two months earlier --> This I'm pretty sure is not available in the liner notes, where are you getting this information from?
• The album shares majority of the tracks from Impossible and features remixes of three singles; four remixes of "Breathe", two remixes of "Did It Again" and one remix of "Some Kind of Bliss", along with three remixes of Minogue's promotional single "Too Far" --> Please tally this information with the one present in the track list, it doesn't add up.
• Amazon.co.uk review is not acceptable.
• I can see just one review if I ignore the one from Amazon, you would need to amend the lead now since it makes it sound like multiple reviewers gave their commentary and came to a conclusion.
• Mixes debuted at sixty-three on the UK Albums Chart on the entry date 15 August 1998.[16] Mixes was Minogue's highest charting remix album in the UK, until it was taken over by Boombox, which peaked at twenty-eight.[16] Mixes also charted on the UK Physical Albums Chart, which compile the top 100 albums based on physical CD sales; it also reached at number sixty-three.[17] Mixes is Minogue's final album from Deconstruction.[18] --> The sentences all start as "Mixes.... " makes it extremely repetitive.
• Please see the same instances of WP:OR in the Singles and promotion section.

Keeping on hold now for improvement. PS, please check the external links tool also for few redirects. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 11:46, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi @IndianBio:; I have finished the adjustments on the article. Regarding the WP:Original research mentions, my apologies; these Kylie articles have been abandoned by me from when I started working on them, and need further attention. Regarding the comment Mushroom released Impossible Remixes on 8 July 1998, but initial pressings were on sale two months earlier; check the new reference to understand why I mentioned it the last part. Regarding the Amazon.co.uk review, I believed a staff review (with the staff member's full name) is pretty effective to justify some statements on the album. If you don't think these comments are justifiable for the article, just message me back or remove it. Cheers CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 04:38, 19 March 2016 (UTC)

Congratulations, I'm passing the article. :) —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 14:43, 22 March 2016 (UTC)