Talk:New York State Route 31A/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Admrboltz in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Admrboltz (talk) 20:29, 26 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Notes:

  • "it turns southeast as it approaches the hamlet of Clarendon, the largest community on the route since Medina." - sounds kind of off... reword?
    • Entire section rewritten since I couldn't think of a good way to change this.
  • "In the center of the community, the route intersects" - two pronouns are being used, either remove one or both pronouns to avoid confusion.
    • See above.
  • "NY 31A ends just 1.5 miles (2.4 km) later, however, at a junction with NY 31 and NY 19 Truck in a residential area southwest of the village of Brockport and the campus of SUNY Brockport. " wordy
    • Rewrote this section as well.
  • right-of-way - wikilink.
    • Done.
  • ""New York's Main Highways Designated by Numbers". The New York Times: p. XX9. December 21, 1924." - its on page XX9?

  I am placing this article on hold --Admrboltz (talk) 20:38, 26 November 2010 (UTC)Reply

  - Looks good, passing --Admrboltz (talk) 15:04, 27 November 2010 (UTC)Reply