Talk:Northwest Airlines Flight 421/GA1
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Latest comment: 14 years ago by Dough4872 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 18:54, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
Comments:
- The lead of the article is very short. More information should be added to provide a summary of the article.
- There are several short paragraphs throughout the article. These should be combined to form longer paragraphs.
- Are there any pictures that can be added to the article?
I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 18:54, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
- Expanded the lead with information about the cause of the crash and aftermath of the investigation.
- The short paragraphs in section "Flight" were consolidated and/or expanded.
- Commons has no images of Martin 2-0-2 aircraft whatsoever. I uploaded the single schematic from the CAB report (wing root assembly) and put it in. Otherwise, no -- there are no other suitable images available that I know of.
--Mûĸĸâĸûĸâĸû 20:29, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
- I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 02:26, 5 December 2009 (UTC)