Talk:Olivia (Fringe episode)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Matthew RD 17:43, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

I shall conduct this review. I noticed that Brown Betty (Fringe) and The Firefly (Fringe) was nominated before this, but I added the plot to "Brown Betty", hence contributed in the article, and "The Firefly" is not relesed in the UK yet, so I don't want to get spoiled. I'll review this article soon. -- Matthew RD 17:43, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

I shall see how the article is doing against the GA criteria:

1. Well written: See notes below.
2. Factually accurate and verifiable: Sources aplenty, no dead links. Passed.
3. Broad in coverage: Passed.
4. Neutral: Passed.
5. Stability: No edit war throughout history. Passed.
6. Images: One non-free image, with approproate tags used, and two free images, they all check out fine. Passed.

• "Over there", to "Over There", both words should be capitalised, as it is an episode title.
• I would prefer if the Anna Torv link would follow Oliva's name on the lead rather than the plot section, but that is just my opinion.
• Link to "Walternate", wherever Walternate can be found among the Fringe character pages.
• In the plot section, link the actors' names after Lincoln Lee, Charlie Frances, Brandon and Marylin.
• "The episodes closes on the prime universe" suggest change to "The episode closes in the prime universe."

Other than that, the article was a good read. I will place the article on hold for seven days until the issues above are addressed, but with only a few, I don't expected it to be on hold for more than seven hours. Good luck. -- Matthew RD 18:21, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Hi Matthew, thank you for the review and comments. I've seen other episode articles add the actors' names in the plot section (instead of the lead), and just thought it would help unclutter the lead. "Walternate" is (unfortunately - this should probably be changed) listed under the article Walter Bishop (Fringe), so I provided links to it. I made other edits you recommended. Thanks! Ruby2010 talk 18:39, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

• Quick passing by note: All three images lack an alternative text. _Xeworlebi ^(talk) 18:28, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

I added alt text. Please let me know if it looks alright (haven't really added them before). Ruby2010 talk 18:46, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Alt texts don't use names from the times I see it. For instance, in the infobox image, it would be best to say like "a red haired woman is worryingly looking at a refelction of herself in amber" or something.

Also, is still see the word "episodes" at the last paragraph of the plot section. Olivia is still one episode. -- Matthew RD 19:28, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Better? Ruby2010 talk 19:33, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Better. I will pass it now. Good job. -- Matthew RD 19:35, 3 March 2011 (UTC)

Thank you again for the review! Ruby2010 talk 19:39, 3 March 2011 (UTC)