Talk:Pennsylvania Railroad 4859/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Arsenikk ^(talk) 19:30, 4 February 2010 (UTC)

Some commments:

• I know this is a not an article about the class, but I would like to know a few more key details about the locomotive: perhaps at least the power output and the top speed. Could the lead also mention the use between the first last run.

Added. ​​​​​​​​Niagara ​​^{Don't give up the ship} 21:21, 5 February 2010 (UTC)

• Remember to state the country (i.e. United States).

Added. ​​​​​​​​Niagara ​​^{Don't give up the ship} 21:21, 5 February 2010 (UTC)

• Under the first sentence of "background", "current" is making it confusing the reader as to meaning the 1930s or the 2010s.

Fixed. ​​​​​​​​Niagara ​​^{Don't give up the ship} 21:21, 5 February 2010 (UTC)

• You are using 'that' and 'which' incorrectly, for instance in the last sentence of the "background". Take the time to look up the difference, since using them correctly will enhance your writing.

Fixed. ​​​​​​​​Niagara ​​^{Don't give up the ship} 21:21, 5 February 2010 (UTC)

Nice work! I am placing the article on hold; There is some small stuff to fix, and the article will pass. Arsenikk ^(talk) 19:30, 4 February 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing the article. I believe I have taken care of everything. ​​​​​​​​Niagara ​​^{Don't give up the ship} 21:21, 5 February 2010 (UTC)

Congratulations with a good article. Arsenikk ^(talk) 12:59, 6 February 2010 (UTC)