Talk:Croatian Parliament/GA1

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Latest comment: 12 years ago by Wustenfuchs in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Wustenfuchs (talk · contribs) 21:21, 16 February 2012 (UTC)Reply

  • Well-written:
(a) the prose is clear and concise, respects copyright laws, and the spelling and grammar are correct;  Pass
(b) it complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.  Pass
  • Factually accurate and verifiable:
(a) it provides references to all sources of information in the section(s) dedicated to the attribution of these sources according to the guide to layout;  Pass
(b) it provides in-line citations from reliable sources for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines;  Pass
(c) it contains no original research.  Pass
  • Broad in its coverage:
(a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic;  Pass
(b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).  Pass
  • Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without bias, giving due weight to each.  Pass
  • Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. Pass
  • Illustrated, if possible, by images:
(a) images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content;  Pass
(b) images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.  Pass

Nice job on the article, however, what about the lead, it is stated that Sabor didn't met from 1918 to 1945, however, reading the history of the Sabor I found statement that it met in 1942, truth to be said, as Parliament of the Independent State of Croatia. But I haven't found the information that Sabor met even in 1945. When we solve this, article will pass.

Overall:   On hold  Pass

--Wustenfuchs 22:21, 16 February 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for reviewing this article. In respect of the lead issue concerned, I have expanded the final paragraph of the lead with a mention of the 1942 meeting of unelected Sabor as the matter is discussed at a greater length in the body text. Similarly, ZAVNOH assembly is considered a part of Sabor history and therefore it is also mentioned there, but in no more than a single sentence because the lead is still just a summary. I realize that the latter could use an additional reference in the body text - and that is added too now.--Tomobe03 (talk) 10:40, 17 February 2012 (UTC)Reply

Ok, then, that's it. It's promoted. --Wustenfuchs 18:12, 17 February 2012 (UTC)Reply