Talk:Parsifal

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Latest comment: 8 months ago by Real4jyy in topic GA Reassessment
Former good articleParsifal was one of the Media and drama good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
On this day... Article milestones
DateProcessResult
March 23, 2007Good article nomineeListed
February 18, 2010Good article reassessmentKept
February 17, 2024Good article reassessmentDelisted
On this day... Facts from this article were featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "On this day..." column on July 26, 2007, July 26, 2008, July 26, 2009, July 26, 2010, July 26, 2012, and July 26, 2015.
Current status: Delisted good article

GA Reassessment

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Result: Delisted. Real4jyy (talk) 13:18, 17 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

This 2007 listing contains significant uncited material in the "Performance history" and "Music" sections, failing GA criterion 2b). The "Synopsis" section should also be rewritten to comply with MOS:PLOT, part of criterion 1b). ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 03:55, 31 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Could you elaborate on your plot concern? Nikkimaria (talk) 05:04, 1 February 2024 (UTC)Reply
At over 1,600 words, it is rather lengthy, and should probably be cut down (I note it was previously a gargantuan 4,500 words before HandsomeMrToad streamlined it last year). I am also unsure about the execution of the interspersing of musical details. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:04, 1 February 2024 (UTC)Reply
I think given the subject area noting how the music integrates with the plot is appropriate? Nikkimaria (talk) 01:05, 2 February 2024 (UTC)Reply
Eh, perhaps you're right. Still, that is the least of the issues outlined above... ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:54, 5 February 2024 (UTC)Reply
This article is kind of all over the place in balance and cohesion; the Music section is downright painful to read. The article (and particularly the music section) would do significantly better if modeled after Brian the structure work on Das Rheingold, which is definitely more worthy of GA than the current Parsifal article. The Interpretation and influence section should also be rethought, it is perhaps not summarized enough. Aza24 (talk) 23:03, 5 February 2024 (UTC)Reply
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