Talk:Path (album)

GA Review

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Nominator: Skyshifter (talk · contribs) 23:05, 21 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 18:23, 26 August 2024 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Pretty clean. Just some minor grammar fixes and a passage needing rewording. Ping me when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:45, 26 August 2024 (UTC)

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

• MOS:'S —  A lot of cases of "Kraus'" etc. need fixing.
  • Done
• accepted to release the album. maybe "agreed"?
  • Done
• A music video for "Bum" was released on June 6, which Fred Pessaro of Revolver described as colorful. Reorganize sentence. Is June 6 "colorful"?
  • Done
• Chicago Reader's Leor Galil said that Kraus "expresses himself even more clearly" when compared to End Tomorrow, while highlighting Remove comma
  • Done

Sourcing and spot checks

• nostalgia by referencing a VHS recording of the X Games Reword as too close to the source review from Pitchfork.
  • Done

• 7: Stereogum review contains "barreling" quote on "Bum", but I do not see a date reference for the single in here. Y
  • I don't know how I got that February 18 date in there, but it should be February 28, the same date the Stereogum article was published, so it should be fine.
• 8: Bandcamp confirms release date. Y
• 11: Chicago Reader review has clearer lyrics, "near-ambient", "vocal caterwauling", and intangibility quotes. Y

Images

• Album cover has NFUR. Alt text is present.

@Sammi Brie: done! Skyshiftertalk 01:51, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

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